Reviews for My life as a NINJA |
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Nishi No Kaze chapter 2 . 7/28/2018 Sara, you have a wonderful story in the making. It’s got a fresh premise and interesting characters. However, it is a bit difficult to read. I recommend you look for a Beta Reader, there are plenty of experienced authors that will help you develop your plot and help you with your grammar. Respectfully, Nishi No Kaze |
SunriseSara12 chapter 1 . 7/24/2018 Sorry about that this book is not yet complete. It was a accidently mistake and I just realise that it said it complete. I have been trying to to take out the complete but it won't take out. All of my attempts so far have done nothing this past hour. Thanks for the advice! |
Inkaliber chapter 2 . 7/24/2018 Why do you have it as complete? Is this story abandoned or is it just that short? Also, it’s proper that with each time a different person talks you start a new paragraph. Just some friendly advice from a fellow writer. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/13/2018 This is pretty awesome can't wait for the next chapter |