Reviews for To Learn how to Dance |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was good. Do not sell yourself short. You have been doing a good job with characterization |
![]() ![]() ![]() "I have perused you pamphlet and I wish to know more..." lol enjoying your story! I look forward to the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story about s one of my current favourites . I can't wait to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lotor reads fictional adventure books, headcanon accepted. Kudos. God bless. -Silver |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was amazing! It flowed really well and the plot was well made/ written. I cannot wait to see what you write next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I felt the tension when Allura touched his scar. Are the two going to be awkward around each other the next morning? Kudos. God bless. -Silver |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really want to see the rest of this. This is very well written. Kudos. God bless. -Silver |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait to rest the rest! its really good do far |