Reviews for His Secret Admirer
WowThatPlotTwist chapter 10 . 5/20
Experiments? See this is Why public schools are better
AllmeDrivs chapter 18 . 3/17
Cant wait to read more
Alvelvnor chapter 1 . 11/20/2019
I'm going to guess that the first POV was not anyone from RWBYNPR, and yes I'm reading this again because it's Sooooo good!
Taxevasion888 chapter 1 . 10/27/2019
ok boomer
BlueDraken chapter 2 . 10/12/2019
Hmm. Welp Looks Like Weiss is out of the running. Nora maybe.
BlueDraken chapter 1 . 10/12/2019
Theories:
Sibling: Either Yang or Ruby doesn't see likely for Admirer. As even if they were obsessed with Jaune they wouldn't call other sluts. Hate each other a little maybe, but not that far.

Rich: The Admirer seems to know where to get the things they need, and the patience to use it. Not only the patience to use it, but the patience to follow a plan.

Compliment: Out of all of them the only ones that didn't compliment him were Weiss and Ren, assuming Ren is straight the only one who didn't comment on him was Weiss. She instead put forth a insult against Yang.

Admirer: Seems to love the idea of what Jaune represents instead of who he is. So maybe someone who doesn't know him to well. Only a passing acquaintance perhaps
Fullmetal11791 chapter 3 . 7/24/2019
Interesting story so far. Not sure how far im going to read because its making me somewhat ill, but i think its been pretty well written so far.

Only thing i havent liked is Jaune's assumption that Ren would tell everybody in teams Jaune and Ruby about Jaune getting raped if Jaune confided in him. Definitely not something he would do, and i think thats something Jaune would know at this point.

Otherwise, while definitely a bit sick, this is well written.
avjuan37 chapter 18 . 7/1/2019
please make more chapters
Guest chapter 1 . 6/11/2019
This was a horrible idea. I shouldn't have read this. This literally ruined my whole night.
Not to say this is a bad story, its not, but I should've looked at the horror tag and known better. This was a mistake on my part. I'll take the L for this.

I thought it'd be the funny type of Yandere but no this is the disturbing I fake my own death and move continents Yandere. I only kept reading hoping Jaune either escapes, kills himself, kills them, or breaks the curse. But from what i'm seeing there is no good ending here. Its all gonna end bad. Welp, I won't stick around cause this physically hurt to get through. You're a great author but i'm not cut for this. You did your job as an author and made me feel strongly for your story. Even if its not a positive way. Anyways, good luck with your story and also I hate you for ruining my evening (JK).
TalonIbnLaAhad chapter 18 . 5/24/2019
I vote for Roman! Anyways, just found this and ended up actually enjoying myself (and not in the way most others... "Enjoy" themselves). I actually am having fun with the story and find myself wondering how this will all play out. Salem certainly adds a strange new direction to take, but considering Jaune has never gotten a say in story direction this just continues the trend XD until next time! Good luck and take care!
NintendoRookie chapter 18 . 5/22/2019
Honestly, I'm not exactly a fan of smut, but everything else about this story is amazing! I love the dark, suspenseful tones, how the situation is percieved from the different characters while the rabbit hole only deepens further, the way that you portray Jaune's reaction specifically as he starts questioning what he wants and what he should do. There are even a few pieces of Stokholm Syndrome sprinkled throughout the whole thing! I can't wait to see what happens next, and keep up the good work!
Talilover chapter 18 . 5/19/2019
Out of the choices I'd very much prefer Emerald, I've enjoyed her scenes a fair bit more than any of the others so far...save the beacon group themselves.

Which is gonna bring me to my next point, I hope you don't intend to have the girls from Beacon on the sidelines for too much longer. People (or at least I) tend to read RWBY fanfics for...well team RWBY. I can understand that other characters shouldn't be ignored, or that eventually you'll just run out of stuff for them, but in my opinion this story was alot more enjoyable before the whole Neo kidnap thing. I mean the building tensions between the girls was nice, like a bomb...that ended up being a dud (they all of a sudden just come to their senses and realize they got played, no big inner group conflict).

Of course it's your story, and it hasn't been awful by any means recently, but I'm defintly eager to have Jaune reunite with the beacon girls.

Oh also Ozpin has been a almost complete no show, I assume that's because he's being his typical all knowing/ big plotting self, would like to see more of him as well.
Lighthopperhoop chapter 18 . 5/15/2019
Salem.
Alvelvnor chapter 18 . 5/1/2019
Adam, or a gender bent version for the visitor.
Evolution chapter 18 . 4/20/2019
I vote Salem because I enjoyed her character so far.
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