Reviews for A Modern Day Fairy Tale
Guest chapter 38 . 7/22
the baby can be emmetts and he has the right to claim the child if she is putting it up for adoption if proven the childs his
BethMasenCullen chapter 56 . 7/22
I really enjoyed this story!
EeWee chapter 56 . 7/20
Another wonderful story.
blewartrk chapter 9 . 6/24
Goodbye
blewartrk chapter 7 . 6/24
Moi cherie. That's the line from Jimmy Neutron when he split his 7 personalities and what his romantic side calls Cindy LOLLLL
blewartrk chapter 4 . 6/24
Can you rewrite this story and just make Alice get hit by a truck or something?
blewartrk chapter 1 . 6/24
You can't fool me. Genovia inspired the name of your little country, am i right? Lol
southernpur-rica chapter 56 . 6/22
Absolutely loved this story!
SnapCrackledThePop chapter 54 . 6/15
That was cute.
SnapCrackledThePop chapter 46 . 6/15
JC, someone put Bella in inpatient therapy for all her whining.
SnapCrackledThePop chapter 45 . 6/15
Why turn Esme into Alice? Not very Queenlike.
SnapCrackledThePop chapter 21 . 6/11
So, I’ve noticed a lot of mistakes in this one. Alice was suspended last chapter, but they mentioned her being in school this one.

Edward mentioned having a phone call scheduled with Esme for later in the afternoon, but a past chapter stated they were 9 hours ahead...which btw would put them in Asia, not Europe.

It was stated Bella’s great grandfather immigrated, but this chapter it was her grandfather.

Just small things. Not trying to be over critical, just would be good to keep a story board or have a beta to catch them.

Also, we could make a drinking game out of how many times someone is called a bitch or whore lol.
SnapCrackledThePop chapter 19 . 6/10
Bella, for the love of god, stop with the self pity girl!
SnapCrackledThePop chapter 18 . 6/10
Sing sing doesn’t house minors. That part went too far.
tinkerbear10 chapter 56 . 6/2
I love it alot!
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