| Reviews for As She Lies Dying! |
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Guest chapter 2 . 7/12 Totally loved this story |
Loveforgreeneyes chapter 2 . 5/21 I never liked those 3 sisters. How dare they! |
Bookwormkat1 chapter 1 . 4/11 oh goody more harry potter references! |
pegasus5406 chapter 2 . 5/20/2019 I loved it, but the only thing I had trouble with is a part of it was repeated from page one to half of this one, but all's good, I still loved the story...thanks hon...huggs. Peggy |
LadyViolet2112 chapter 2 . 4/28/2019 Great story! But, incomplete. There a lot of unanswered questions. |
silversimon chapter 2 . 4/19/2019 Another triumph by a brilliant storyteller! Thanks for sharing this unique little goodie. |
momma2fan chapter 2 . 3/25/2019 Great story. |
TinaF chapter 2 . 3/7/2019 Awesome story! Thank you for writing and sharing it. |
AngelDragon1976 chapter 2 . 1/31/2019 Absolutely love this story! Roflmao. love how you made those two get their just desserts! |
Kyra chapter 2 . 1/24/2019 OMG! This was excellent! I would love to read more! I love Jasper and Bella! As always your stories are awesome! Keep writing! It's really a pleasure to read! |
Leo2010 chapter 1 . 1/12/2019 Wonderful. I would really like to see more like this. Love Bella taking charge of her own life and change and being Jasper's mate. |
Peacelovefairy chapter 2 . 12/17/2018 I like alot would like to see more soon please thank you |
acetwolf94 chapter 2 . 11/11/2018 I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE! |
Bell 1 chapter 2 . 9/23/2018 While I enjoyed the second chapter, I didn't' enjoy the repetitive portions. I liked the revelation of the Volturi when Bella saved Edward and what Aro read from Alice and Edward. Those two are in for one heck of an eye-opening experience. It was wonderful to see Bella take the reins of her change and decisions. Thanks to Carlisle's medical aspects, it was easy for her to do. Then to discover Jasper was hers all along was a wonderful bonus. I enjoyed Bella's bonding with the other Cullens, rather than with Edward and Alice, after she moved in with them. It was sad to learn of Charlie's passing, but certainly made Bella's decision to go into her new life easier on herself. A very enjoyable story. Thank you for sharing. :) |
sc4536 chapter 2 . 9/16/2018 Loved this second chapter! Especially the evil twins getting their just desserts :) Also, I loved the 'emotionalrange of a teaspoon' line- one of my favourite HP lines! |