Reviews for Hailey |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Let me guess one of three things will happen: 1: Hes gonna finally snap and dream at his sister. 2: She nearly dies 3: She yells hiccup that she knows he despises her existence. |
![]() ![]() How is Hailey a jerk. I’m confused |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heh well, yeah I'm not dead. At least I think so... my smartphone was broken and i didn't had much motivation to read when i got a new one, just in case you're wondering why I didn't review... So I like where this story is going and I'm sure you are going to make the sequel great. So just keep it going! PS: here's a late Happy Birthday for you! Good to know you're a day older than me. Great... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Smooth violin music in the background. HMMMMMMM *goes and plays romantic flight* now I gotta watch the movie again yay - |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting i would have Stoick point out that he wanted to find the hidden world The first of Stoick's flashback scenes has him telling Hiccup about The Hidden World and how it will be Hiccup's job to find it when he's older. Not only is this demonstrating that Stoick always believed Hiccup was destined for great things, but he also expresses that the reason for finding it is so they can end the war between humans and dragons. It's notable that at this point in time, Stoick hated dragons, believing one to have killed his beloved wife, yet the way he phrases it isn't in a Kill 'em All sense, but so that both races can live in peace away from each other and the harm that either race could inflict on one another. It shows that despite his obsessions in the first film, Stoick never truly wanted to kill dragons, but believed it was the only way at the time. and not all dragons are nice Smothering Smokebreath, Screaming Death, Slitherwing, there quite a few nasty ones mixed in. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Happy late birthday! I honestly can't wait for you to finish this story and start the sequel. Bit I'm still patiently waiting for it. Those letters are such a good idea. And this chapter is amazing, as always At first you got me at the beginning of the A/N. I'm so glad it was just a joke. |
![]() ![]() ![]() . . . you didn't let Hiccstrid have their moment?! How could you?! I'm good though, definitely NOT planning some sort of revenge or anything. . . . Did I say that out loud? Anyway! Great story, Hiccup is alive, Hailey "cares", and so does Astrid! Cool. |
![]() ![]() Please don’t have Sitrin die please |
![]() ![]() ![]() hailey is going to freak out that her brother leg is gone |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah! Hiccup and Stoick made up, Hailey is still loved, and Hiccup almost died. Oh wait, that last part . . . I know how it ends, but . . . you know what I'll just stop talking. Love your story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gods... Sitrin :'( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another update only 3 days later? That notification made my day. Feeling motivated is good for you! This should happen more often. I don't know how to not do a cliffhanger at the end of a chapter as I do it in my own stories too... I'm so glad that my review did manage to make your day. I just wanted to express my love for your story *shrugs* How dare you just kill of Sitrin like that? You can't do that to Hailey! And now she'll also have to worry about her brother. This is going to be the worst day of her life! I would really like to have another fast update instead of waiting several months. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! I know this review is rather short in comparison to my others but I just didn't know what else to write... |
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![]() ![]() oh boy hiccup does care for Hailey now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() have Hailey save both toothless and Hiccup |