I’m loving this so far. I can’t wait for the whole wolf thing to be in the open. And for Ari to just be in the know.

Nooooooooo. I need mooooore

I can't believe this story has been abandoned! I'm dying for more. I really hope you pick it back up!

jhkjh i can't help but cackle when i think of what their faces will be when (if) Ari confesses that she knew about their fluffy sides XDDD

omfg- imagine Ari's reaction when they ask if her name is really Sunshine-

Soo it’s been 2 years and a pandemic, are you ever gonna update? Either way this is one if the best twilight fanfic I’ve read so thanks for writing 8 chapters at least. Def going into my favs

Hey I know it’s been like two years, but I just wanted to say I absolutely love this story. There are very few stories that actually make me laugh out loud and this is one of them. You are a very good writer and I hope you will one day continue this story!

So I wasn’t too sure about this story, but the last paragraph of the first chapter really made me laugh and now I’ve read the whole story and I like it enough to subscribe. I like the girl trio and Red sounds interesting, and Mason will probably change because of Ezekiel and they all should probably come clean together about the Pack (I mean Ariadne, the boys, Kim and probably Teya since I’m suspecting that she could be Embry’s imprint if he wasn’t trying to avoid looking anyone in the eyes... or maybe he did look in her eyes and I’m wrong but you never specified, and the excuse Paul gave about Jake being in Canada because he thought Bella would be his imprint but it’s in fact somebody else makes me think it could be Red, at least if I understood correctly what Paul said, so maybe include Red in that group also, she is a witch apparently anyway so she probably knows). And also how is Ariadne smelling things like that? Is it because she’s a descendant (Mason is going to change and Ariadne has better senses or something)... Sorry for the rambling, the whole review probably makes no sense whatsoever...

I was re-reading this story and remembered how much I loved it and wondered why it wasn’t in my favorites but then I got to the chapter where the witch comes in and remembered why. Out of nowhere, and made no sense. But to each their own, I guess.

I love this story so much! Your writing style is just beautiful I couldn't stop reading. I started at 1 am and now I'm done and it's 6 am and my online class starts in four hours. But 10/10, I would do it again.
I you ever have time, please think about maybe continuing this amazing piece. Thank you so much!

i love this thank you

I really hope you will update someday. I read this story 3 times now just patiently waiting :)

It is strange Ariadne is suddenly changing her attitude, even stranger shr is flirting with a jerk like Paul. Why would she feel anything for him and suck up to him so much...

This is one of my favorite Paul stories and I’m so sad it’s been forgotten. I come back every now and then to read it because I love the dynamic Paul and Ariadne have.

miss u come back pls

hi, i know you haven't updated in two years but I just wanted to say I've just devoured this story in only a few hours and i really love it. This might be one of the best written imprint stories out there and i love how you've written Ariadne and your interpretation of Paul. Honestly it makes my stomach to somersaults thinking about these two (but they also crack me up, you handle humour so well). Ariadne's approach to dealing with the pack is a fresh take on many tired stories, and I'm very intrigued as to where you were taking this story, especially the introduction of the witch. I would love a pm or something just to let me know where you had planned on making this story go, if only for my own curiosity, but i completely understand if you don't want to, especially since this story is probably in the past for you, so no worries. I think your writing is brilliant and good luck with you future writings!