| Reviews for The Boy Who Wanted A Family |
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Lord-Chrono chapter 1 . 4/7/2018 Cute! |
Zerthin 'The Writer' Draggoon chapter 1 . 3/6/2018 I've been thinking about adopting a story for a while now... I like this; I really do but I don't know if I can do it justice like you... maybe you could be my beta and help me out! |
nightmaster000 chapter 1 . 3/5/2018 Really awesome oneshot. |
lun27 chapter 1 . 3/3/2018 Poor Harry being treated like that, I can't even imagine someone being as manipulative as Dumbledore. Harry definitely deserves better! I liked the part where Life, Death, Magic, Fate and Destiny fought over Harry :) Add a few commas here and there and it will read a little better though. It really haps structuring the sentences :) Thank you for following my story She's Clueless by the way! -Lun |