Awesome

Please come back we need u

When will you post the next chapter?

Grrr... *throws a flashbang along with a 3rd brick* Rember better next time! In all serious news though good chapter keep it up!

Hey can Toby become human for a day and fight with weapons and pull a duke nukem one liner and he spills out the word fuck oh have Toby teach tiff the birds and the bees in the school episode.

You better be sorry. But good chapter regardless. Keep it up dude.

Haha. It's no problem. It's the same for me when I haven't uploaded a fanfic in a LONG while. I just have huge writer's block (and the fact I'm a senior in high school).
Love the chapter! The showdown between Toby and Knuckle Joe felt so right. I look forward to the next appearance of Knuckle Joe and his interaction with Toby.
Plus, I like the name you gave Knuckle Joe's father. Just so you know, his name is Jecra.
That's all from me. See you in the next chappie! :3

Nice chapter.

I don't really mind that the chapter was released late - people have problems and I'm trying to respect that as much as possible. Like, ok, you happened to forget about the chapter, but at least you've managed to deliver. Some people won't do even that.

People often seem to forget while judging others that no one is perfect - people will have issues in their lives and writers are no different in that regard.

Anyway, thanks for the new chapter, I'll be waiting for the new one to come out.

It’s good to see this story return

It's been a while- literally! I forgot how long it was since the last time you posted the last chapter, but it's good to have you back and it's pretty understandable. But seriously, I thought you gave up on this when it was starting to get good, and I was just about to throw a boot too!

Nonetheless, it's really good as always. Keep it up, looking forward to the next chapter and keep your promise or we'll order a monster to clobber that there Toby!

Or maybe another brick.

Please update it's getting good.

Very good story. I can tell that you are trying to keep close to the series story line, but putting your own spin on each episode. The idea of Toby and Tiff having romantic feelings for each other I actual like too. So the last chapter made me very . Will enjoy any new chapters that you post.

HAVE MY CHILDREN! (Not really just kidding) please update your updates are starting to turn ito thr update schedule of destiny 1 : non existant and dry
We need more of thus awsome content bro

it's a peace sign! oh my god that makes so much more sense since dream land is the 'world of peace'! I thought it was a rabbit...

also bytheway how can a bird purr

Yeah, Meta Knight's totally sorry for kicking Dedede down a cliff. TOTALLY.

As fucking if.