(The links to the other site aren't working. I think I know why from a similar issue I had. I was writing a link, and it shorted to a single dot. The issue seemed to be around having letters after the dot. So, for instance, have a gap in Monika. chr, so that the link is still visible. Otherwise the site doesn't display it.)

Keep up the good work, I'm really enjoying this fanfiction so far 3

Yeah
I know that feeling
But keep going
You’re doing great!

BLIN MU BRUDDAH IM LOVING THIS! I CA- I CAN TASTE THE MAYMAYS FROM IT! IT'S BLYATIFUL! BEAUTIFUL! IMMA THROW A YEET YOUR WAY ONE SEC... YyyyyyyyEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET! HAHA MA BOI. *minecraft piano plays*
STAY CHEEKI BREEKI

you mean this is your first fanfic? Wtf it's great! Although, I feel like the pacing is just a tad bit too fast, but it's still good. Anyways, keep up the good job man! I look forward to your story and improvement.

dun duunn duuuuuuuuunnnnn.

First Fanfic you say? Well, it is looking good so far my friend! Can't wait to see what happens the next day!

Not sure if this will be answered later in the story but,
What is the meaning of the title?
Or were you supposed to do math homework while writing this?
:)

Boi this is great and somewhat funny, keep up the jokes cause they can't be any worse then mine.