Just stumbled onto this story. It was lovely. I really enjoyed Cousin Severus. Thanks for posting!

Nope.

The basic story premise is good. Great even.
Your initial execution of the plotline is good.
but..
you have an incredible slavish adherence to the original plotline, even when the changed actions by Severus and Harry would have COMPLETELY derailed them. In essence, you are making new characters out of Harry and Severus, then BLUDGEONING them to fit into the old story with complete disregard for the way *you* have made them grow. This makes Severus and especially Harry act completely out-of-character.

Unfortunately, this is ruining what could have been a superb story.

I love this story! Is that the end or will there be more?

Really good story very interesting. The way how Severus and Harry/John were acting with each other in the Sumner and then in school were great they are really good at playing the others fools really good loved that. Ron was great to not being an jealous git and helping Harry even being cool with Severus and what happened. The spell was Really genius loved that the most and Severus is alive big yay. *cookies for inspiration on other stories and the good work*

I think this might be my favourite Sev rescues Harry stories. I like that the blood wards came from Severus, not Lily. Makes you wonder what might have happened if Lily and James did manage to cast the spell originally.

I love this story so much but I think that the ending could have been clearer. The writing was clear and good but I had no Idea that it was complete and tried to go to the next chapter...
Besides that it was brilliant ;p

Loved it!

What a wonderful guardian story! Thank you for sharing it.

Thank you please write more or the story. Its wonderful! I enjoy this when having an off day I set and read it more then once. Thanks again

You're story was well developed and enjoyable from begining to end.

Thank you for taking the time to share this.

This was a very unique take on vanquishing Voldemort. I always prefer it when it's magic based and not a battle that kills children. Much more inventive. The scene with Argus got me all misty eyed.

Well done!

You've hit on points that many Maurader fans ignored in cannon. Lupin lied by omission and was irresponsible in managing his lycanthropy. Even when Harry told him about seeing Pettigrew on the map he still didn't go to Dumbledore. Those actions could've easily gotten a student killed.

yay!

Very good..
Maybe you could make an epilog.

Read your story in one go. It was wonderful! And now they don't have to hide! Thanks for a great story!