Neat. Shame there’s not more, but this is good as is.

И всё?только 1 глава?
Это же 2 родственные души

good story to read wonder what happens next.

yay my favorite 2 anime characters (minus mizore) together at last nicely done!

If love to see this as much more than a one shot, it sounds like it would be a very good story. Also I like your writing style.

Very nicely written. I feel like you really captured Haku's personality here. It does well as a one shot, but begs to be continued.

What an interesting idea! I love it! If you happen to decide to continue it somehow, be assured that you will have a loyal reader in me :)

I've actually want to see where this goes it looks interesting

a little fast paced