Reviews for Transformers RWBY: The Flames of Redemption
Leanisha Thomas chapter 40 . 8/3
Yes reading this book makes my day all the time.
Mass0234 chapter 40 . 8/1
Next chapter return of breakdown and shockwave , knockout
warrior of six blades chapter 40 . 8/2
No matter how times I see it, it's truly a tragedy how screwed Ozma was. Given an impossible task by the gods all because of their poor ability to handle the Salem problem. They expect her to just figure it out herself when left to her own devices after killing her beloved right before her eyes not just once, but twice after reviving him over and over?

No one will take that lightly and while she SHOULD have handled it better, you can't guarantee they will when traumatized and stripped of the one thing they love. Then rudely left to figure shit out for themselves. The God of Light could have handled this a lot better, try to console her by being an ear to listen and talk to her to help her under stand in time that life and death needs to happen. Show her some examples to help solidify this case.

Then when Salem brings three kingdom's worth of armies to fight the gods, stupid as that was and doomed to fail. The God of Light did NOTHING to stop his brother from wiping out everyone except Salem, then once again left her to her own devices expecting her to just play along with the plans of those who isolated her, cursed her, and killed her beloved repeatedly before her eyes.

They're like immature children who don't understand the pain and loss of others and how HARD it is to heal when left ALONE. People who are grieving need support, love, and care from others to help them cope! Not like they was so busy doing much else except guarding their damn pools.

Now don't get me wrong, Salem was definitely the bigger wrong between them all, but the gods did NOTHING to help guide her in the right direction at all. Worse, of all people the God of Light brought back to be his champion for this impossible mission...he picks the same fucking man they all played parts to wipe out humanity over?!

Worse, as if THAT wasn't bad enough... Ozma doesn't have the same immortality that Salem does, oh no...they made him a constantly reincarnating soul who inhabits the body of a like minded soul to share that body next! HE AGAINST A PERFECTLY IMMORTAL WITCH AND THEY EXPECT HIM TO UNITE HUMANITY WITH SUCH A SPITEFUL SOUL STILL RUNNING LOOSE?! Uniting humanity is an impossible mission as it is, but to do so with a corrupted immortal who is spiteful as your enemy on top of that bullshit?! Wow, they are truly childish and stupid. THANKS FOR THE HELP NIMRODS!

Okay rant over...I did enjoy seeing the Decepticons reactions to the true origins of Ozma and Salem. Especially how Megatron related to Ozpin for his terrible past and seeing how Salem's actions led to the end of humanity the first time around. Predaking for the horror of seeing the human race once endured a mass extinction like his own people once did, Dreadwing in how he just knew the peace between humanity will never last, he gets it! WE can't maintain peace for long periods of time before some asshole mucks it up by being too greedy, too envious, losing themselves to wrath, losing themselves to lust, or just being too prideful even thinking themselves above everyone else."

Humanity has many redeeming characteristics, but they also have their flaws. We are like the mix of light and darkness, we clash, but we can also work together at times. The only way to gain true clarity is not to sink into darkness and lose sight of everything else, or to get too close to the light and be blinded by it's light. You must walk in between light and darkness, to be in the Twilight to not lose sight of yourself or your path.
warrior of six blades chapter 39 . 8/2
So now RWBY, Qrow, Ozpin, and Maria all know about the Decepticons who was sent here by Optimus. I'm glad Yang has been able to accept Megatron still at her side, it helped that Optimus was able to provide some proof and helpful words of support to what the Decepticons told them.

Though now it's Oz's turn...and a part of me feels for him in what's to come.
Guest chapter 40 . 7/29
But wait a minute Megatron, Dreadwing, Soundwave, Lazerbeak, and Predaking were giant, extraterrestrial robots before they came to Remnant so do you think that their powers can defeat and kill Salem?
Guest chapter 40 . 7/29
Aww yeah, new chapter one day, siege coming out the next this is turning out to be an awesome week
Erick-Genryusai chapter 40 . 7/31
Great Chapter so far:

So thats how Salem came to be, as well as Ozpin. Pretty tragic tale of her.

So..the Gang found out in the story that Salem cannot be killed...shocking.

But...knowing Megatron, he'll refuse that part, while others are about to give up hope and quit...he'll Yell at them mad for their cowardness, and talks to them:

"WHATS THIS I HEAR. YOU'RE ALL GONNA QUIT. I REFUSE TO DO SUCH THING AS THAT"

"But Megatron, you Heard the tale. Salem cant be killed. She's Immortal"

"GET THIS TO YOUR HEADS. THERE IS NO SUCH THING AS UNKILLABLE. EVERYTHING DIES. NO MATTER WHAT THEY ARE, OR HOW THERE MADE. HUMANS DIES, PLANTS DIES, PLANETS, STARS, METALS, ALL DIES. NOTHING LAST FORVER"

"But...the storie..."

"I REFUSE IT. YOU THINK I'LL GIVE UP AND ACCEPT IT! NO. THERE IS ALWASY A WAY, THERE IS ALWAYS A SOLUTION TO EVERY PROBLEM. I HAD MY SHAIR OF LOSING BATTLES, EVEN WARS. BUT I DID NOT BECAME WHAT I WAS BACK THEN BY GIVEN UP. I FOUGHT AHEAD AGAINST ALL ODDS, AGAISNT ALL OBSTACLES. AND WHAT I LEARNED, IS THAT FOR EVERY STRENGHT, FOR EVERY POWER...THERES ALWAYS A WEAKNESS. A FLAW IN THE SYSTEM. WE FIND THAT WEAKNESS, THAT MISSING LINK, AND WE SHALL PREVALE. NOW. IT WONT BE EASY, BUT MAYBE HARD, BUT IF WE STAND TALL, TOGETHER, AND HAVE COURAGE AND FATE...WE WILL WIN.
Luffy L Deathwalker chapter 40 . 7/30
I still say that Jinn knows there is someone who CAN destroy Salem but SHE needs to harness her powers to their fullest potential. She said Ozma couldn’t destroy Salem that to means that someone else CAN
NERF Trooper chapter 40 . 7/30
I'm kinda worried that this is gonna wind up like a any other insert fic: nothing really changes in terms of chronology, just that new characters get to do stuff that mildly affect canon. I wasn't too happy with the characters during volume 6 because everyone seemed to lack empathy for Oz. Still, I am enjoying this story so whatever you decide, I will still give it a go.
Chessmasteroftheuniverse chapter 40 . 7/30
If you can’t kill her, you seal her, seal her powers, or put her in a situation that she can literally do nothing as you then fix the world of it’s flaws.
IPadking3 chapter 26 . 7/30
Soundwave: superior Qurow Bronwynn: inferior

The 8 year old in me squealed with joy
D-rex102 chapter 40 . 7/30
Really well done. I liked that you added the other characters thought and opinions as Jinn was telling the tale. But just one thing... take it a little easy on Oz in the next ch. Yes he should've told the group about his history with Salem but at the same time, she was the love of his life at one point. They had a family. What happened between the two of them is going to leave emotional scars that wouldn't be easy for anyone to talk about. Just my opinion, but again very well done.
Locke Lynx chapter 40 . 7/29
Well, I mean they managed to outsmart Unicron and defeat him despite being an ACTUAL god in Predacons Rising. The same would have to be applied here.

Either that, or they try and have Ozma and Salem see reason and make an agreement like the Gods of Remnant did before.

Just hope they know that if they try to hurt Ozpin, they also cause Owcar pain. He exists too, he's not just a meat suit. He's a 14 year old kid who got thrusted into this war and given a role and had no voice in the matter. He's kinda like how Megatron started out: an underappreciated slave.
merendinoemiliano chapter 40 . 7/29
Meh, was nice, but you could either focus more on the Decepticon'S opinion or jump directly at the farm. See you soon.
MeteorElDrago chapter 40 . 7/29
Oh I just know this won't end well at all for Oz.
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