good fic

Great story!

I was actually hoping the next morning you were gonna have Grace and her friends walk in on Bruce and Selina and then have Selina insult them because she was grumpy that they woke her up and then I was hoping you were going to make her threaten them but it was still an amazing story.

This was amazing! Really well written :) I loved how you connected Alfred, Tabitha, and Barbara. As much as I love billionaire brat Bruce, I love the real Bruce more. I’m glad Selina brought him back

Loved your story, Bruce and Selena are my favorite and I really hope they can get back together soon. Are you continuing this story? Awesome job!

Okay so this is only like the third Gotham fanfiction I’ve ever read, and did not know what to expect with an M rated fic of Bruce and Selina, but I realy did enjoy it, it wasn’t raunchy or corny, it was actually really sweet. I liked that you showed them both nervous and had Bruce nervous in his performance and asking Selina for approval.

noooooo it can't be over, it just can't

Love the story you’re a great writer can’t wait to see what else you do with batact

Great job! You made me blush at the part he was closing in on her. I like how you write selina btw. I can actually hear her voice!