| Reviews for Northern Conqueror |
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PAT2024 chapter 56 . 8/2 So sad that this story is over. I would have loved a bit more of J/D/S ruling and breaking the wheel, a bit more private moments with their kids... But I really liked this story, although not really convinced by Jon and Sansa relationship at first, weirdly it was a bit better once Dany joined. Thank you for the hard work. |
PAT2024 chapter 18 . 7/31 I really like this story, but right now I am really not convinced that Jon could be in love with Sansa, it’s so OC for him, he is so honorable, this would be like incest in his eyes (even if he is only his cousin now), In case he had any slight love feelings poping up, he would do anything thing to ignore them and he would never act on them, and at least not be the one to initiate any intimate displays. I would have imagined Sansa being the one to be proactive, not him. On the other hand, Sansa falling for Jon works, because she never really considered him her brother during her childhood and he saved her, she was never raped and defiled by Ramsay, so she kept this kind of ideal knight in armour dream she had when she was younger... Anyway this is your story and I’m going to go with the flow... |
PAT2024 chapter 10 . 7/28 I like your story so far. Thank you. I’m a bit puzzled by the last part of this chapter. Your Jon must be very OC, because I don’t see how he could ever kiss Sansa this way. He might have feelings for her, but I think he wouldn’t act on them. His honour would forbid him. He always considered her his sister, they have been raised together and the revelation that now she is « only » his cousin should not have him feel comfortable kissing her like a lover. Anyway, let’s see where you are taking us with this... |
TheAttemptedWriter chapter 35 . 6/22 I know the story is finished, but imma speculate some names. Crows Claw/or Crows Flight? Nights Blade? Wightsbane? (A play off of Heartsbane.) |
TheAttemptedWriter chapter 33 . 6/22 Qyburn was only able to do what he did with Gregor at the time because he was still alive at the time. He was fucked and would've died regardless and did still become a mere shadow of his former self, but none the less I'm not all too sure a corpse could be like him. |
TheAttemptedWriter chapter 28 . 6/22 Olenna did have a pretty badass death in the show. Having Jaime give her a poison only to look at him and be like, "Oh, and by the way you fucking Lannister, I'm the one who got your first born bastard killed bitch." lmao |
arashishizen chapter 52 . 5/27 It was a little lighthearted but enjoyable to read. |
Platinum-bro chapter 56 . 4/26 Wow, you have written it before season 8. Even though there is some little things that I didn’t like, specially the survival of every main character, But it was much much much better than what D&D wrote. Kudos to you. |
kanjichibi chapter 7 . 2/11 Good chapter. |
kanjichibi chapter 5 . 2/11 Good chapter and I am looking forward to the Jon/Sansa |
kanjichibi chapter 2 . 2/11 A very different take on the story. |
kanjichibi chapter 1 . 2/11 Good start. |
Svenion chapter 52 . 1/12 this is where I stop reading. I really liked what u did with Sansa, as well as including DT in the relationship. Sansa going straight to the wall instead of marrying Ramsay was cool also. I just cant read another story where Euron fing Greyjoy is the main boss. |
Svenion chapter 47 . 1/12 jesus, he lost again? thought this was supposed to be a fix? |
Svenion chapter 42 . 1/12 ugh, both "magic horns" are here as well... disappointing |