You had death lock away his magic because... reasons.

Then you had them unlocked in a literal Deus ex Machina because he was up against a hostile legend?
And this is after all those times he seems to stumble across OP pokemon? Are making a Gary Stu thing on purpose?

Man, can you not write a fight that doesn’t rely on Destiny Bond or Perish Song? It kinda makes the fights feel cheap as fuck.

so much for posting the next chapter :(

I'm more inclined to pair harry with Steven or Tobias, but that's just me

Já faz dois anos em...

This is a long week

Are you going to continue with the book? Because I really liked it. And if you dont want to do the unova arc then you can just skip it or postpone it you're the author

* Laughs * Harry should have a pikachu

Fuck. Have ever search general Pokemon info dude
Requza is one of kind Pokemon at level of kyogre and groudon and u just have the guts to make of same level as a fucking charizard not even a mega
PS dude these three Pokemon at the top level among the legendaries fuck off and play Pokemon

What is the point of a Harry Potter that doesn’t have magic?

Please update soon please

Erm, its really a good fanfic to read even tho the shouting ends with a "." instead of "!" or in some scenarios where the person is really enraged, it goes with "." still instead of "!?/?!" which kinda made it funny imo.

Tho, if u will add pairing its kinda dissapointing for me cos it started with pairless harry in the pokemon world till the latest chapter. Might as well complete the fanfic with pairless harry as it should be :/

But if u decide that harry will get a girl of his own then why not.

And this fanfic is ady Hiatus tho, abit sad. I do hope that you will add new chapters.

h.

I really hope that you can update soon!

More please