Please update this you never seem to finish your stories either you restart them or just stop please just finish something

You a different author? I noticed that your grammar dipped a bit compared to the last few chapters. You ok if your TV he original author? People don't just go from writing wonderfully as you were doing to making such mistakes. Not without sustaining some kind of head injury anyway. Or you just got lazy enough to not want to correct your work.

But the story is good so far, but if you don't mind me asking where did you get the idea for the lifeforms in these last 2 chapters?

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Salem has appeared, or at least some sort of clone or manifestation.

Loving it. I really like exploring other planets and not sticking to one fandom. It really makes this story something new, refreshing and a very enjoyable.

That was cool

Great job on the chapter so when can we see Sienna

And we still haven't gotten to the RWBY portion yet. Do you plan to make Salem an Otsutsuki?

This is honestly a refreshing story to read cause I have no idea what is going on plot wise. I get the general idea ship jumps dimensions eventually finding the rwby world my concern is how many chapters will it take to get there? But you have a follower in me for the story consider my curiosity peaked on how this story will go cheers!

Dear writer
I really love your story and look foreword to another update
I wish you the best of luck in your endeavors
Love
Kinyochan ️

Did they land on Remnant or on a planet along the way?

Nice story so far wonder who all Naruto will meet anyways keep up the great work!

Based on what Naruto said when he tried to sense that Irvine let me guess that was a derivative of a grim from Remnant was it not? If so that is a really great twist to your story and I don't want to reveal what I'm thinking because it might spoil it for the other readers but I have an idea of where you're going with this and I f-ing love it!

Whoa that was cool

That was cool