This was an intense chapter!

I had already read this chapter, too. It's all coming back. I wonder how far I read. :)

Dana... what is this mysterious plan?

I'm curious about the paper that appeared! I hope it is explained in the next chapter!

I like the cliffhanger! I had to start over from the beginning and will continue for a bit tonight. :) I'm starting to remember what happens and am eager to read the next chapter again.

Wow... depressing

FINAL REVIEW: Wow... that was pretty dark. The darkness only improved the story though ;)
This is probably one of the best fanfics i've ever read, and i mean it. I'm looking forward to what's next!

FINAL SCORE: 8.5/10
Pros- Interesting characters/story, action & drama done right
Cons- Bad grammar, a little hard to follow

FINAL TRILOGY SCORE: 9.7/10 (i know I didn't review the first two, but I read them, and loved them)

One mire left. I've waited two months for this moment.

Be glad that you still have at lesst one dedicated reader. :)

two more
oh boy
if todd dies I might end up laughing
(also, all the evil guys are dead yay)

(To Le Chef’s corpse) Not to be

(forgot to add that it seems like you might be noticing that i'm practically your only reader ((that gives reviews, anyway)).)

ohhhhhhh
(kinda weird that I may be your only reader overall, though)
(also, when does this story take place? A GBA wouldn't be feasible in 2018.)

derp derp derpity derp

(how can he recover from cancer that fast?)

I...I... I can't explain...

O.O
O.O
O.O
O.O
O.O

well...

that escalated quickly