Reviews for Jaune's New Foxy Wife
Guest chapter 4 . 8/23
more more. please
Guest chapter 4 . 8/8
OK why do people like to go and on about how Jaune and Blake never interact but not with other people, so many people in RWBY have never interacted, but for some reason everyone likes to shove that fact down are throats when it comes to Jaune and Blake, but after reading this chapter I can see why Jaune doesn't talk to Blake, she's horrible, all she mostly did was talk shit about him to his face, also thought horrible things about him and treated him worse than any racist human probably ever did to her, what makes her a hypocrite when humans are not giving faunus a chance that's wrong, but when she's judging Jaune and not giving him a chance that's supposed to be all right is it she's just being judgemental , Blake bitchdonna disgusts me.

Also I hate the idea of Jaune only did anything in Beacon when Pyrrha was forcing him to, like can't Jaune just try by himself without his Mom Pyrrha making him, like the whole Jaune would never read a book or go into a book store unless it's for a comic or he's force to, just rubs me the wrong way and yes I know we didn't see the best of Jaune in the show, but to me that was do to bad writing and CRWBY trying to delude morons that Arkos had a reason to exist, because if you take away Jaune not knowing Pyrrha or Pyrrha "forcing Jaune to train or study" than Arkos had nothing to stand on.

God I see why Jaune needs a crossover wife, because all girls in the world of RWBY for him suck.
123ABIR123 chapter 4 . 8/6
The story is pretty good you should continue writing it
Guest chapter 4 . 7/30
update pleaaaseee
LuckyPickl3 chapter 1 . 7/21
Nice hope to read more
Goderasu chapter 4 . 6/26
It’s taking all of my brain to not think of Mater from Cars
doubledamn chapter 4 . 6/2
If I make a suggestion/request for the next Omake? Saber Lily (Nero)?
Guest chapter 4 . 5/12
unimpressive blonde. This is one of the reasons I don't like the RWBY girls their usually shallow as all hell, also why is it unless it's a Knightshade fic Blake is usually a horrible bitch to Jaune for no reason and even in Knightshade fics she's usually horrible for the beginning part.

Also while Pyrrha was the only person to train Jaune I also think she was holding him back, I mean she only trained him in the basics and no one else but her trains him even when she's long dead and when your only means to train is a video of someone only showing the simple basics of swordplay is only going to hinder you in the long run, so yeah fuck Pyrrha the overrated bitch and fuck Arkos for holding Jaune back with both getting stronger and probably character interaction for dam shipping, also if she truly believed in him she wouldn't have pushed him in the dam locker, so the way I see it Jaune doesn't owe her shit, also Jaune isn't dense just because he doesn't notice Pyrrha's clearly one-sided crush.
KarimHD chapter 4 . 5/3
I hope you are doing well, and seriously you're stories are really good I suppose its because I'm a huge nasu fan and you write these characters so well but don't give up on this story its really good. I can't wait to see what comes next.
Jack54311 chapter 4 . 4/1
Oh wow. I definitely wanna see a story with Female! Merlin aiding Jaune. This is a good story. I like it. I do hope you continue it.
Tetho chapter 4 . 3/7
Man, another interesting fanfic dead :(.

Hopefully it gets updated.
memefarius chapter 4 . 3/8
Lollved it you write amazing fics
CrappyIdiots chapter 1 . 2/21
I like the idea of Jaune learning Japanese Shinto magic thing to Casko.
JumpingToaster chapter 4 . 2/13
Way too early to tell as story-wise not too much has happened so far. But as the Mr.Z thinks has plenty of potential entertainment value.
apacho1999 chapter 4 . 2/12
Please don’t forget this story :.(
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