| Reviews for A Lawyer and A Detective, an unlikely pair of roommates |
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InjusticeforAll chapter 7 . 3/5/2018 Hello there.. Even though I usually prefer the usual Justicykes (infinite fluff, usually well written and believable) and/or Klema (hard to write, bittersweet to digest, yet beautiful when is well done), Emapollo isn't a bad ship at all. In fact, I look forward to reading from you since I liked this idea and how you executed it. Good idea to make fun briefly of Prosecutor Elsa,by the way, that guy is really overwhelming... ¡Saludos! InjusticeforAll |
Just.InStories chapter 7 . 3/5/2018 Not bad. Good job! |
FSOA chapter 7 . 3/5/2018 The story came out great. It's a bit fluffy, but that's what I came here for. Now if I can get a 3ds emulator for my phone, I will probably actually play Spirit of Justice. |
FSOA chapter 5 . 3/4/2018 *encouraging and believing. Pedant aside, I have to say this story is turning out excellent so far. |
OnYourRight chapter 1 . 2/25/2018 I can tolerate Apollo x Ema, even tho Klavier x Ema and Apollo x Athena are OTPs in my opinion. Also, the title for this story is exactly the same as another story on here that's mainstream. It's by Sebastian0001. And the concepts are the same. I'm not asking you to, but please consider changing the name as to not confuse people who follow both stories. |
Camperor chapter 1 . 2/25/2018 Okay, so... I'm not really into Apollo x Ema, but I'm pretty neutral to the couple. Ema is like two years older for him and I don't prefer to see Ema leaving LA so early temporarily just for him. And does Justice Law Offices have multiple floors? I remember it just having only one, and not multiple floor buildings in particular. This story is well written. I see nothing wrong with the characterization of the canon characters. Although, I am a little bothered by seeing Ema leaving L.A. because Apollo is there to be infatuated with her. L.A. is a paradise filled with life and luxuries, not something she abandons behind by romance. For this post-SOJ fic, I'm gonna stay neutral for now. I might look into it once in a while if you decide to post a new chapter. If the rest of this story is a murder case of one of the beloved canon characters(Rayfa or Amara, for example), focuses on anguish, and feels too far of on my standards of the Ace Attorney fandom, then this story is a no-go in my book. I'm sorry, but it's the truth. Hope you continue working on this story sooner or later. This is Camperor, speaking. Nuff said. |