I like your literal language. It's beautiful.

You made a massive mistake in Cornelia's section. Why would she think that he always commands from behind his army? Almost every time they clashed, he faced her personally on the front lines. CC was in disguise in the midst of her army in the ghetto, he personally shot her weapon away at Narita, he faced her with Kallen at the docks, and he barrels through her entire aerial forces to get to her in the government building during the battle for Japan.

This isn't a small mistake, Lelouch's notion that the king should lead from the front is introduced to us in his very first scene.

well freakin done... *snobs*
Always wanted to see what happened if the people who he care about realized his plan...
I thank u for this...
and I got the perfect quote(?) for this... made by me

"One man with a million of miracles.
but this same man have also a million of sins.
a burden too heavy for any ordinary man.
he now carries it all the way to his grave.
a legacy which we, the audience, will never forget.
how he made a symbol for the people,
that came from all of his lies.
becomes the hero of justice.
but he didn't take that path,
instead he took the devil's footprints.
and ended his life.
for the price of peace.
where everyone will remember him.
not as a savior, but a demon.
but for those who know.
let us take a moment.
for the final requiem is about to begin.
The Zero Requiem."

Beautiful job on all the reactions. Each one understood Lelouch so well, and in a way nobody else could. Good work on the personalities; each one felt so detailed and varied.

Damn it, I have tears all over my face and my eyes are burning right now. I hope you're proud of yourself!

Lovely writing 3

...But still, utterly heartbreaking.

This was a fantastic story, and it hurt my heart to remember the Zero Requiem. I love the way that you portrayed all of these characters, and I know that I'll be reading this story again and again in the future.

This was actually rather well done. I can't say much more than that it left me quite emotional.

excellent depictions. almost made me cry

Jesus the feels. Literal fucking tears front this piece here. God that's tearing open the wound allover again. Both breaking bad and code geass first I finish breaking bad again and know this.

It was decent enough.

Kudos.

A very emotional fic.

A well done story. Nicely done with the description of each of the characters as they felt and saw what was taking place. It quite the story to have the reactions of those that watched the execution of Lelouch and it brought tears to my eyes. It was definitely a sad event as they all realized what was happening as well as why it was happening. This was just simply amazing to read and a well done ‘what other characters thought about such and such event’ story. Thank you. Keep up the good work.

I think it was well done, I'd almost like to see you do a sequel where Lelouch's mourners are gathered together as CC takes away his body.

incoherent crying is all i'm capable of right now OH MY GOSH THIS IS AMAZING

(though it doesn't say it's complete i think you need to fix that...)

-hands over platter- Magic cookies for you!

great chapter keep it up