Reviews for The Lost Incredible
Guest chapter 4 . 8/29/2019
this is so good... shame it seems you gave up on it...
Penstills chapter 4 . 3/14/2019
I love this! So far I think it's a very interesting concept, and I look forward to the meeting between Jack-Jack and his wayward family.
alex-cabot chapter 4 . 12/19/2018
looking forward to the next chapter
Guest chapter 4 . 12/7/2018
OMG! I love it. Please keep doing this.
Guest chapter 4 . 12/1/2018
thanks for updating so fast, please keep it up. this story is amazing
justin-ryans chapter 4 . 12/2/2018
It's true that i really want to see the Parr's family reunion but not if it means rushing the story. I really like your writting style and the story's pace. Keep up the good work.
TabbyKat405 chapter 4 . 12/1/2018
Syndrome, he was born into a superhero family. Did you not think that kindness and compassion wouldn't be traits of his? How smart are you really? Update soon!
alex-cabot chapter 3 . 11/28/2018
great story, really well written and very enjoyable. I am looking forward to future chapters
Guest chapter 3 . 11/25/2018
i am so happy that you updated. Another great chapter please keep on writting this!
TabbyKat405 chapter 3 . 11/22/2018
Alright he's alone. Let's see where we go from here. Update soon!
Guest chapter 2 . 8/25/2018
Damn this story has soooo much potential. It would be really emotional if Jack had an epic fight against his family and lost. And after congratulating each other and gloating about defeating such a powerful villain syndrome told them the truth, that they just beat up their lost family member (sort of like boku no hero with Tomura and Toshinori)

It would also be cool to see the Parr familiy in the months following Jack's abduction or years later how his birthday still affected them (especially Helen)

This really is a great story and your writing style is also really good. I don't know the frequency of your usual updates but i really hope you don't give up this story, it would be such a waste.
bombinate chapter 2 . 6/26/2018
awesome! cant wait for the next chapter!
Disneyheart31 chapter 2 . 6/17/2018
i’m really enjoying this story please update soon
TabbyKat405 chapter 2 . 6/15/2018
Jack Jack, you're "uncle" is missing some screws. Update soon! I love this! I didn't imagine finding it today that it'd be updated so quickly, but I'm so happy it did! Keep being incredible! (get it? Bad joke? I'll shut up)
TabbyKat405 chapter 1 . 6/15/2018
Please please continue! This is SUPER INCREDIBLE! See, cause they're superheroes and they're the... Incredibles- I'll shut up. Update soon!
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