Read the whole story. Can't believe I liked reading this.

Not just smutty but also hot... and romantic.

Hope you keep on doing this, And... since you take requests, perhaps I'm gonna PM you about it.

Elliot was definitely an interesting fellow. Also, i completely forgot to mention that Mari was written oh so well, so Mari but more womanly. Kudos for still staying true to her core as you write her in a scenario the canon can never reveal.

Read this one a while back. Not really too keen on reading the whole thing so I just skimmed until I reach the main dish. The OC himself is a convincing character that it's not just a plot ploy ti get into Mari's pants; intense sexual frustration is present in a convincing manner that made everything a hot ride to read. Always loved how detailed the smut is, physical and emotional aspect.

Good to see you still aren't afraid of pissing off the Yuri loving fans XD.