Reviews for Atonement
Rosalieemmamailie chapter 56 . 7/29
Wow . I really like your new concept. the crown, DA as a millitary unit etc very Well written.
J flood chapter 21 . 7/2
i don't know if you know but you use MLE WHEN ITS DMLE DEPARTMENT OF MAGICAL LAW ENFORCEMENT NOT MAGICAL LAW ENFORCEMENT PLEASE FIX THIS AND THANKS FOR WRITING THIS STORY I AM ENJOYING IT.
Guest chapter 53 . 6/5
I will hate to see the story end. This was a tedious chapter, with everything repeated from earlier, but not everyone read the story all in one go, like I did. Maybe other people needed reminders/recap.
Guest chapter 47 . 6/5
Love it. Arthur shines in this.
Guest chapter 44 . 6/4
Exciting
Guest chapter 35 . 6/4
Yay! You are keeping me very engaged in the story. Another exciting chapter. Spy thriller, dragon battles, political machinations, lots of surprises, too.
Guest chapter 34 . 6/4
Exciting chapter. The plot thickens. Lol
Guest chapter 32 . 6/3
Wow. Never a dull moment.
Guest chapter 25 . 6/3
Awareness.
Guest chapter 21 . 6/3
Holy smokes! Exciting chapter.
Guest chapter 18 . 6/3
Nobody complained when Harry and Hermione left campus to go meet the Canadians? Nobody missed them or worried?
Guest chapter 15 . 6/3
Well written dramatic suspense cliffhanger.
Guest chapter 13 . 6/2
LOL
Guest chapter 12 . 6/2
I love him quoting General Patton, about never missing an opportunity. Good story so far. Quite original, too.
Guest chapter 3 . 6/2
It's especially interesting to read about this fictional rebellion now, during the real life protest marches and race riots after the murder of George Floyd last week.
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