| Reviews for Atonement |
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Rosalieemmamailie chapter 56 . 7/29 Wow . I really like your new concept. the crown, DA as a millitary unit etc very Well written. |
J flood chapter 21 . 7/2 i don't know if you know but you use MLE WHEN ITS DMLE DEPARTMENT OF MAGICAL LAW ENFORCEMENT NOT MAGICAL LAW ENFORCEMENT PLEASE FIX THIS AND THANKS FOR WRITING THIS STORY I AM ENJOYING IT. |
Guest chapter 53 . 6/5 I will hate to see the story end. This was a tedious chapter, with everything repeated from earlier, but not everyone read the story all in one go, like I did. Maybe other people needed reminders/recap. |
Guest chapter 47 . 6/5 Love it. Arthur shines in this. |
Guest chapter 44 . 6/4 Exciting |
Guest chapter 35 . 6/4 Yay! You are keeping me very engaged in the story. Another exciting chapter. Spy thriller, dragon battles, political machinations, lots of surprises, too. |
Guest chapter 34 . 6/4 Exciting chapter. The plot thickens. Lol |
Guest chapter 32 . 6/3 Wow. Never a dull moment. |
Guest chapter 25 . 6/3 Awareness. |
Guest chapter 21 . 6/3 Holy smokes! Exciting chapter. |
Guest chapter 18 . 6/3 Nobody complained when Harry and Hermione left campus to go meet the Canadians? Nobody missed them or worried? |
Guest chapter 15 . 6/3 Well written dramatic suspense cliffhanger. |
Guest chapter 13 . 6/2 LOL |
Guest chapter 12 . 6/2 I love him quoting General Patton, about never missing an opportunity. Good story so far. Quite original, too. |
Guest chapter 3 . 6/2 It's especially interesting to read about this fictional rebellion now, during the real life protest marches and race riots after the murder of George Floyd last week. |