When I read this I was shocked but then checked and found you back. SOoooooo….. CONTINUE! PLEASE! I WANT TO KNOW WHY THEY ALL STARE AT HIM!

look forward to next update!

Oh my god I love this. I don’t even know what NCIS was but I enjoyed the story progression and might have maybe gotten attached to Huey.

This is very interesting ! Keep writing. You’re a good author.

Moreee~~ more~~ and more~~ 3

It's a good idea, one I'd enjoy reading.

This is an intriguing premise. Not at all what I thought it would be from the summary, but very interesting. You have good plotting and dialogue skills, too, although I would respectfully suggest that you have someone beta the chapters before posting, as there are quite a few spelling and grammatical errors. When there are just a few errors, it's easy to ignore and stay caught up in the story. But when there are many, it makes it difficult to stay in the story. I suspect many of the errors were from simply typing too quickly (just in typing this review I've had to back up and correct at least five errors from typing way too fast, for example). It's a good story start and I will continue reading.