that shit was cool

PLEASE UPDATE!

Ok so this story actually has a lot of potential i assume that next chapter would have maybe been it all from the start how every thing happend? I do think anbu should be in capital letters since it's and short name for the organisation? (i couldn't think of the right word) Ok so implement this "war dog" tattoo i have to say it looks pretty much unique and original i hope that's it's part of a military corps or something in that order almost like the Akatsuki doing those odd jobs before going bijuu hunting. You should try to never shorten a technique /jutsu feels lazy as fuck(FTG). other then that this story rocks for a first chapter.

Too much exposition, not enough description.

It's a wild premise that wasn't built up to, so there isn't any real feeling or payoff in the climax.

I need more I need a back story and and I need the fight with minato and Naruto I need to know what he does after I need it all

Cool story
You should totally write a back story
Can't wait to see 8f you do continue this story

Write a full back story:)

love this..you should do a story of naruto's life from his childhood leading to his meeting with minato

love it. I'm really becoming a fan of dark!naruto.