What the fuck lady. It was weird but not super bad until you put toothcup then it was weird disgusting and horrible at the same time. Felete all parts with gay and it won’t be as bad until than I have one thing to say to you and one thing only. !FUCK YOU!

This is fucking sick. This bitch keeps begging for reviews and comments and yet they post this shit. Honestly wtf

This is fucking sick. This bitch keeps begging for reviews and comments and yet they post this shit. Honestly wtf

That's my stopping point. I can't go any further for a while, maybe even forever. The reader when feeling detached enough won't really get that emotional but even they have their breaking points.

I've read ones more horrible(it's supposed to be with what the fic is about) and covers the dark points so sickeningly close to what I can most certainly compare to the real thing despite not being in such position, despite my desperate detachment, that I become so godanm emotional not that far into the first page.

Yours is way below that level so far but still somewhere around it. I just don't believe I can continue with this fic from this point on. I presume you handled things well though considering the amount of other chaps beyond this.

I'm skimming this cuz I don't want to get too emotional. I'm skipping some details and feel really detached from this. Better for my health I suppose with the detachment.

please update soon. love the story.

It’s going amazing please keep writing

great chapter
cant wait for more

damn awesome and unsettling keep it up

Thanks for the update... I not into guys getting fuck, but was an interesting chapter. And I want to see what coming next...

Great chapter I’m looking forward to reading more!

More with Toothless is always welcome!

excellent chapter

Ngl decent smut.

hiccup pleading to his girlfriend astrid let me explain she forced me astrid hissing shouting yelling at her boyfriend hiccup let me see if i understand my boyfriend let another female forced you to have sex with her