| Reviews for Embers of the Sun |
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Guest chapter 5 . 8/30 Fabulous story! I really adore your characterisations and the time you are taking to develop characters. This is one of the best written fics I have read in a while! Can’t wait to read more! |
Vane3131 chapter 5 . 6/14 Gah I need this to happen . Paul and Bella always makes me happy. Ugh cullens |
beka-trueblood chapter 5 . 1/28 I hope you continue this story soon it's really good. |
Jaysto chapter 5 . 10/31/2019 Great story so far I hope you are able to complete it I really enjoy the characters so far |
brightsparkx chapter 5 . 10/22/2019 I’m really loving this story! I really hope it gets updated some time soon |
jaytan chapter 5 . 9/29/2019 I really enjoyed reading this, it looks like you haven’t updated in a while but I’m going to add to my favourites and alerts in hopes that you pick it back up again. I love this Bella, She is so much more believable and relatable. Even with the teeny bit of Paul and Bella you have given your readers, it’s better than most Paul/Bella fics I’ve read(as I love this pair I think I’ve read nearly all of them) anyway amazing job, your writing is fantastic! |
FlamingGreenDragon chapter 5 . 8/16/2019 This is a pretty solid story and I really like the pacing so far. Plus your not forcing any of the interactions like I've seen other people do. You're a good author and I hope that the next chapter will be if a similar quality as thise that I have read; when you get time to write/post it that is. |
momma2fan chapter 5 . 7/7/2019 I am definitely intrigued. Do you plan to update again? Would love to read more of this and see what happens with her and Paul. |
Djayden chapter 5 . 6/30/2019 i hope you update very soon cant wait to read more! |
WolfPackMomma chapter 5 . 2/1/2019 I’m sad that the last update was March! I sure hope you are able (and interested) in working on this piece some more. I love Bella/Paul and this is one of the few where they aren’t rushed! Hoping to read more! |
sassy973 chapter 5 . 12/7/2018 Loved it hope you update soon. |
cheeseless-lasagna chapter 3 . 11/28/2018 Thank you for writing this! There is such a dearth of good writing in this fandom |
Ana Quinzel chapter 5 . 11/27/2018 please update, this story is amazing! |
braddox chapter 1 . 11/4/2018 Absolutely love this story! Paul/Bella is one of my favorite pairings and I love how you write them, along with every other character! Charlie is amazing and I love the addition of Leah! I think her and Bella will be great friends. Please continue! |
SlytherinInToxicKat chapter 5 . 10/20/2018 Update soon! |