That was wonderful! Great job!

This story is really great! Please write more short smuts!

Loved it!

Just what the doctor ordered! Gah, world needs more smutlets! 3 I loved your self-assured Kagome and you write brilliantly! Much better than many natives here (sadly.. for them, I mean)

Please, please, PWEESE, write more short smuts! For the sake of the world!

um, how many ways can i say I love this? So well written! Flowed very well, just loved it so much!

Heh, you'd think that since she's been planning it, she would've planned a night for it to happen when her family wasn't around (but I guess that's not always so easy). At least she locked the door though.

You had to feel for Inuyasha a few times when his insecurities showed.

I think you hit a nice happy medium with the portrayal of a first time. It wasn't all flowery and perfect, nor was it totally awkward and cringy.

Very well done!