| Reviews for There Is No Way We Can Be Related! (BEING REWRITTEN) |
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wearedeadpool chapter 6 . 8/23 it's honestly pretty funny how Weiss is releated to every member of team RWBY. |
LorcanShade chapter 10 . 8/13 I think the best option if you're rewriting it is to at least keep this story up until you post the new one, then post a quick AN to announce the new story. |
wearedeadpool chapter 8 . 8/11 ya know, i wouldn't be surprised if Qrow had a billion other illegitimate children he didn't know about all across Remnant, Qrow pretty much the Ezio Auditore of RWBY. also, i wonder what Ozpin would think of Qrow having gotten "his" daughter pregnant. |
wearedeadpool chapter 9 . 8/10 I have an idea (if you do decide to continue this story), Jaune's mother is revealed to be the older sister of Taiyang Xiao Long, and the reason this wasn't known is because Jaune's mother always wanted to become a Huntress, but her parents (who are also Taiyang's parents) refused to let her become one because they didn't think she was strong enough to become one, so she told them she was going to become a Huntress, weather they like it or not, and so they disowned her for her choice (obviously she stopped talking to her family after that), she went to Beacon to become a Huntress, and that's where she met Jaune's father (who I think would of been on the same team as her), and how would the characters find all this out? well, Yang would see a new match in her results, and it would show Jaune and say he's her cousin through her Paternal line, I already know both Yang and Jaune's reactions to this would be hilarious, but this is just my idea you could do in a future chapter if you decide to continue this story (which I'm really hopping you do). |
wearedeadpool chapter 10 . 8/9 I'd say keep this story and maybe continue it when you have time in the future (if you don't forget about it), so far I've been very interested in it and I find it funny that most of the characters are related to each other, so I would love for this story to be continued please. |
wearedeadpool chapter 5 . 8/9 ah, I see now how Weiss is Qrow's daughter, this definitely did work. |
wearedeadpool chapter 4 . 8/9 wait, Ruby and Yang are only related through Taiyang, Qrow isn't Ruby's uncle by blood, so I don't get that. |
wearedeadpool chapter 2 . 8/9 great chapter, keep up the good work. |
Dimension Tripper chapter 10 . 7/18 i ok with any as long as there is more |
Mikowmer chapter 10 . 5/11 What you have here is a very strong premise. It's a very cracky premise, but it is a strong one none the less. Still, I think this has sort of turned into a "I really don't know how to keep going with this," sort of thing. The disparate plot lines aren't coherent, and things happen for the sake of happening rather than any real coherent reasoning. With this in mind, a reboot is probably the best option going forward. It will allow you to play with things in different ways, take things a bit more seriously in places, or play around with things a bit more in others. However, just because you are rebooting and starting from scratch doesn't mean that this story that you have written so far should be deleted. Leave it up so that you can see how much better your writing is now than when you started. You might even surprise yourself. |
Guest chapter 10 . 5/7 Keep it up, I really love this |
Kabob003 chapter 10 . 5/7 Do whatever, however I find the idea of Weiss being Blake's sister to be an intriguing concept. Oh, and Neo being an Arc is a cool idea too. Whatever you do I will still read it. |
D.O.F chapter 10 . 5/7 Cardin with Faunus heritage, with an apology bit between him and Velvet That’s all I wish for anyways |
icedshadows chapter 10 . 5/7 ...Do what YOU feel is the best way to go. As long as you still having fun doing this we will keep reading your amazing work. Stay icesome chill dude! |
merendinoemiliano chapter 10 . 5/7 Hoping you'll return soon, decide as you wish. I would say Tai as Weiss' biological father to give a very big middle finger to Raven. |