Reviews for Orphan of Paradise
Cafrye chapter 2 . 6/9/2019
This is very interesting so far. Naruto is going to be in need of a 3 hour bath by the time this is over.
DDDxid chapter 2 . 1/7/2019
I don't think all Trump supporters are dumb. I mean I could say the same about Hillary supporters. I think Sakura's fears about immigrants are funded though I do believe that competition is good for a country that way you either get the best from another country, or the citizens rise up and have to work harder. I feel that immigration had dinner it's purpose a few decades ago and the amount of people going in should be restricted, purely from a critical point of few. thinking logically, how long do you think a country's resources would last if they continually let immigrants in? Welfare and support would go to them instead of the citizens. I think like charity, a country should take care of it's people first before others. And this is coming from a black British woman, it shows that my race does not define my opinions. But this story is very interesting and I like how you portrayed the struggles of immigrants as realistically as you could.
MoonlightWolf.SunshineFox chapter 2 . 12/4/2018
am i the only 1 here who got triggered when u mentioned that goddamnit kaguya? XD
Melyway chapter 2 . 9/29/2018
What is going on?
Neko-fire demon tempest chapter 2 . 5/25/2018
Can't wait to see how your going to twist all of the relationships together.
Kitsune Knight of Darkness chapter 2 . 4/1/2018
I don't know how I missed this story, it's looking good!
Waffles.Sucks chapter 1 . 3/16/2018
I really hope you continue this it is amazing!
bookworm51485 chapter 1 . 3/15/2018
Can we not keep politics out of even fanfiction? Unimpressed
inuyasha16451 chapter 2 . 3/12/2018
Omg please update this awesome story soon.
Atari 9 chapter 2 . 3/8/2018
Interesting chapter, I can't wait for the next one! I wonder what will happen to Naruto next. What's the easter egg? I couldn't find it. Update soon, maybe I'll find it in chapter 3.
Neoh chapter 2 . 3/7/2018
this really gets more exciting. I'm nervous what will happen when Minato finally finds out Naruto is gone? i hope Naruto will achieve his dream in the end without help of sasuke. at least Sasuke would provide naruto protection is enough. btw, keep going with the next chapter.
Ooey-Gooey Senpai chapter 1 . 2/28/2018
What an interesting premise and well written! Please keep going! I can’t wait to see where this leads :)
Atari 9 chapter 1 . 2/26/2018
Very interested in this story, immigration is such a hot topic and the first chapter is a good set up. I wander how Sasuke and Naruto are going to meet? Update soon please.
Neoh chapter 1 . 2/25/2018
love the conflicts. please write this until the end. fanfiction is drying with best sasunaru stories. you are our saviour.
dieblumelacht chapter 1 . 2/25/2018
More pleaseeeeee
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