you say this is what should of happen GIRL DISNEY MADE WHAT THEY MADE YOU CAN'T JUST GO JUDE IT

Actually moron this is the total opposite of what should’ve happened.

A little too much reiteration of the movie plot, and the "(like she did in the movie)" so honestly rather awkward.

I like the idea that she jumped into the truck with Zed & co. I'm just equally surprised her parents would let her after their whole "zombies are dangerous" spiel. I'd've thought they'd try to drag her back out. Points to Gus though for just rolling with it.

This is so cute and beautiful

AbsolAbsolutely adorable! You did a wonderful job staying true to the character's personalities and mannerisms. I found myself able to realistically invision this plating out.

can you like write a sequel that lasts from this point to the end of the movie. it can be another 3 shot. please. i just need to know what happens next.

I am imagening Zoeys face when she sees them sleep there. Im dying.

Really cute

awe! So cute! I love how you explained Zed's mom's absence as well.

cute

Aww! I love fluffff!

I neeeeed more plzzzzz

Love it! :)

So cute! Thanks for posting! Loved it!

The perfect conclusion to an adorable short story!

Mistakes:
She (Eliza) / Just say Eliza instead of She
the moment stepped / the moment he stepped
Z-band / Z-Band
could say anything / could say anything else
brother, / no comma because the 'and' is there
down stairs / downstairs
in old dark pajama / in old, dark pajamas
good night / goodnight
Zed motioned his head to the stairs. / Zed motioned towards the stairs.
Mom too / no too needed
He says instead of stated because you used two stated one after the other
down stair's closet / downstairs' closet (umm I'm not sure with his one so take this 'correction' with a grain of salt...
Zed laid next to her / Zed laid down next to her (...lol I'm not sure with this one either)
Two variations of quiet one after another

Love how Zed and Zoey interacted (totally in character and something I could see unfolding) and the little bit of backstory we got on Zed's mother and how he's still affected by it.
I wonder if they do the second movie if they would mention anything about his mother or make her a plot point. But, anyway, I like how you added her in. It was sad, but interesting, to have her die by an illness because the humans refused to help her out. It's cruel but something I can see happening.

Oh and the ending, so sweet and so Zed/Addison.

I also love the title of this story (I suck with coming up with titles so whenever I see a good one it always makes me happy) and your username is awesome too. Super creative and unique. Definitely stands out too.
Okay now my final thoughts:
Awesome story, awesome plot, awesome characterizations and great writing.
:)