Regarding OC heroes Try the Filipino Hero Lapulapu as a Lancer the Datus (chieftain) of a Filipino tribe and the one who "supposedly" killed Ferdinand Magellan.

now i cannot wait for an epilogue, will it be setting on the future maybe 10 years, this story always make me excited

It seems we have come to the end of this fanfic, folks. Well, excluding the epilogue. What a great adventure this has been~ Well, good thing it ain't over quite yet! :D

Thank you so much, dear author, for crafting his wonderful fanfic and sharing it with us :)

So the war has now come to an end. I definitely wasn't expecting Harry's final act to be ordering Lancer to ensure Ian's safety. I'm sure that action eased some of the pain in Ian's heart regarding his father. And since he's got both his girlfriend and daughter with him. They will be able to help him keep his inner darkness at bay.

Speaking of Lily. I really hope you have both Ian and Jackie meet her mother in the epilogue. I'd love to see both Ian and Lily explain to her why Jackie is calling Lily her mother.

Finally, I'm glad you liked my last suggestion. There are so many great servants in the Fate franchise that just don't get the attention they deserve. Most writers only seem to use the same 10 Servants over and over again.

If your looking for a great story that breaks this trend. I just recently found a great one called Fate Finality by Undying Soul98. It's the only story that actually features Kiyohime as one of the main characters.

It's nearly time for the final battle. Don't feel pressured to get the finale out as fast as possible. Take your time and make sure you're completely happy with the chapter before you post it. I don't mind waiting longer then usual to see the big fight. Because I know it'll be worth it.

Also, I see what you mean about Summer Kiyohime. So I'm gonna change my suggestion to Brynhildr instead.

Hi, it’s me again! I just wanted To say that what I was going to truly mean who doesn’t do justice do the premise and execution of the holy Grail war, I don’t mean kinoko nasu or the fate series in general, What I meant is the author of fate/apocrypha, yuichiro higashide. in my eyes and the eyes of some others like me, it’s not apocrypha’s fault at all. it has a lot of potential, even as just an online game, which was long before fate/grand order came to be. like it has a really amazing concept idea of a great holy grail war with fourteen masters and fourteen servants battling for the holy grail with a Ruler servant overseeing it instead of just seven masters and seven servants with a overseeing priest. I heard that it’s was even going to be set in one of tokyo’s special wards, shinjuku, as probably the main setting for it, and it’s in Japan, just like the three fictional Japanese cities in the nasuverse; fuyuki city ( fate/stay night and fate/hollow ataraxia visual novels And fate/zero light novel series ), mifune city ( Kara no kyoukai light novel series ) and misaki town ( tsukihime And mahoutsukai no yoru visual novels ). and It was the original fate/apocrypha That has no sieg, no yggdmillenia family, no Amakusa Shirou tokisada ( though he really is a very interesting villain ), no mordred ( which is a shame though because I really love mordred ) And no chiron, Achilles ( same with Achilles too, because I like him as well ) And avicebron And they were only in the light novel series that we got. it’s just the true problem is that when kinoko nasu has allowed fate/apocrypha To Be turned into a light novel series set in trifas ( why set it in a fictional city in romania where tokyo’s Most famous special ward, shinjuku, would’ve served as a much better setting? ), the author Yuichiro Higashide Just squandered all it’s potential with a forced romance love story between Jeanne and bland cardboard-kun,
having to let some random mage take the grail from fuyuki for no reason, giving more screen time with sieg and less and less screen time for other better characters in apocrypha with the need of more and more character development, Jack the Ripper, while I still do like her and her lore and her design looks decent, was turned into a stripperific loli by Yuichiro Higashide and the fact that the einzberns summoned Amakusa shirou instead of one of my favorite characters in the main fate trilogy, Angra Mainyu, confirms that in this timeline, fate/zero, Fate/stay night and fate/hollow ataraxia never happened, which is sad. I think it would’ve been better if it was launched as an online game with events taking place after fate/stay night and fate/hollow ataraxia

Oh no, I don't mind at all. In fact, I actually appreciate the changes you made; makes her seem better made then when I first gave her to you _

Great chapter, by the way! Can't wait for more! _

Hey! I’m Just Going To Say That I Take Back What I Said Four Months Ago. I Actually Agree With You About Iskander And Gilgamesh. Perhaps The Holy Grail War Was Never Meant To Be A True Conflict, Just a competition to reach the root or have the grail grant a wish. How Stupid of Me To Think About It. And remember that I said that the Fate series didn’t appealed to me? Well, I was wrong. I actually love the series. Yes. It’s by no means perfect, but it is still awesome. I can respect and understand why many people that hate the series are bothered by King Arthur and other male figures being girls, but that’s not something that should have to matter at all. I mean, your fanfic is an incredible along with the original Fate/Apocrypha online game concept, something that the Fate/Apocrypha novel and anime From Yuichiro Higashide should’ve been, this time with more and more focus on both factions with character development, a female servant class saber that is not even a saberface ( no offense, I like saberfaces, I think they are a nice addition to the Fate series since Arturia is the first and Best saberface Before Mordred And Jeanne, can’t exist without Takeuchi LOL, I just think That a new female saber that is not a saberface would be awesome and refreshing at the same time ) or a genderflipped man ( I can kinda agree with you a little bit with that aspect, but I’m also fine with others, mainly with frankenstein’s Monster, Jack the Ripper, okita And some others ) as the main heroine, less Fanservice with only four female servants ( ones that are not saberfaces or genderflipped Men ) And ten male servants, Better Action And Animation From Ufotable And A More Complex And Complete Unconventional Story And premise of the great holy grail war and not a forced love story with a bland cardboard-Kun that took one of our favorite servants, Jeanne, as his girlfriend and ruined apocrypha’s potential, all thanks to Yuichiro Higashide. have you seen or heard the fanmade visual novel called Fate/empire of dirt? It has a female saber that is dark haired mixed with some red color and with crimson eyes And is a Chinese female servant that looks, though a little similar, very different from arturia. She would make a fine main heroine as the saber of the alpha faction in a Fate project that reboots fate/Apocrypha With the main setting in shinjuku, But with the name of shirayuki mikage with inspiration taken from that of elements from Japanese onna-bugeisha like tomoe Gozen. I think it would be even awesome if the fourteen servants were renamed with fictional names and that are not mythological or historical and Have their backstories changed as well from historical and mythological heroic spirits to beings that are still heroic spirits, but from another dimensional world full of magic and Phantastical species from within the root. I would like to see that.

It's good to see that Jack has given up trying to kill Lily and is now trying to push her and Ian together. I'm also gonna take a shot in the dark and say that Jack will have something special in store for Harry for their next meeting.

Also, here's my suggestions for the servants to appear in the prequel. Summer Kiyohime for Lancer, Billy the Kid for Archer, and Mysterious Heroine X for Assassin.

Finally, when this story is complete. Will your next one be the prequel or will it be the crossover with F/GO?

Ok gotcha and I actually have a few suggestions for lancer servants you can pick one of them how about either Vlad tepes III or karna

What I meant was are the servants excluding Jack the Ripper going to be oc

Such a pity that Spartacus was unable to take down Heracles. Can't wait to see which servant will take the demigod down.

It's also too bad that Atalanta wasn't able to avenge her master before being being killed. At least we got to see Jack show off her Noble Phantasm in the fight. Now let's see if Marcus can figure out a way to turn the tide of the war back in the favor of the Alpha faction.

Also, sorry for the late review. Octopath Traveler is a very addicting game.

holy grail war will end soon, and the prequel will come soon. High casualty in this chapter.

Excellent chapter and nice explanation to my second question so my question for you when the prequel comes out are any of the servants going to be canon asides Jack the ripper

I can't tell you how much I've been looking forward to the rematch between Spartacus and Heracles. I'm still hoping that this battle ends with the Gladiator standing triumphant over the Demigod.

Also, I hope Lily is able to help Ian before he slips over the edge. Although, before that. She'll have to find someway to convince Jack that she has no intention of "stealing" her father from her.