| Reviews for My Brown Eyed Girl(s?) |
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  Why chapter 1 . 4/9 And it's sucks |
 sonicboomboy chapter 14 . 4/9/2019 This fanfic really took off. |
| luger 7 chapter 14 . 3/4/2019 This was a most excellent fanfic. |
| James Birdsong chapter 14 . 2/2/2019 Good three chapters. Nice ending |
| The Keeper of Worlds chapter 13 . 1/3/2019 Awesome! |
| gump1098 chapter 13 . 12/5/2018 Your fanfic is like a box of chocolates. You never know what you're gonna get. |
| Rocco13 chapter 13 . 12/2/2018 Nice freaking fanfic. |
| billybob10 chapter 13 . 11/27/2018 Love readin this here fic. |
| Shodaime Gahokage chapter 7 . 10/28/2018 My theory about Ryoga's question at the end of chapter 7 is that since his cursed form has a mix of his and Akane look any child he carry will have the look of the three of them as if Ranma had got a daughter of his and Akane pregnant. Based on the Ranma wiki and the description you made of Ryoga's cursed form I think the picture of Akane imprinted in the pool is fading and it's turning into an other variation of the girl pool "chanwuchannyannichuan" the moody girl spring. "Sometime ago yada yada Tragic story, now everybody who fall in pool become short fuse girl." or since that was not so long ago the magic was stronger, also for Kiima her first curse was close enought that it might have been working with it since as seen with taro old pools tend to compound their effects, in fact the expected effect to plunging in an other pool then your original form is mix so Ryoga would have become an pig-girl or an "orc", but here we have a new pool so it spent energy overwriting the pig so it could not do a complete Akane. |
| Fariy Fate chapter 12 . 10/25/2018 I like the story. However It is wired to give Ranma the personal pronoun of they. Ranma is one person. I hope you write like before, because they is strange. It is not that Ranma has two Personality to make sense. Otherwise I like the twist and turns and their execution. |
| Dury chapter 13 . 10/15/2018 That karma bit was hilarious. Thank you for the laugh, I needed that. |
| Rocco13 chapter 12 . 10/12/2018 Nice freakin fanfic. |
| BiGDeal chapter 12 . 10/10/2018 If this keeps up, we're going to have to change the NWC to the NBC (Nerima Wrecking Crew to the Nerima Bonking Crew)... Is Kodachi acting normal just a new façade or has she really turned a page and making actual changes? Anyone wanna bet that Kodachi gets a dose of Jusenkyo pond water, and goes double-girly...? |
| The Prophet Of Lies chapter 12 . 10/3/2018 it's a good story with a solid theme and trend which I will be looking forward to. |
| James Birdsong chapter 11 . 9/3/2018 Good seven chapters |
