Haha, poor Simon. He would have to have that conversation with Book.

I really loved the combo of humor, fluff, and sexy parts in this story!

Oh my god that was awesome. First River, then Jayne, but the best was Book! Great story, really fun to read!

LOL aww. Poor Simon. He tries really hard rhough! And this was a really sweet story and I hope you write more soon!

Poor Kaylee and Simon, always trying to find some time alone together and never getting it. River, Mal, Jayne...all prying and can't take a hint! loved it just loved it!

Wow what a funny, sexy and adorably sweet story. Well done!

I have always loved this pairing and you did them great justice! Thank you for giving us all a bit of release from the tension this pairing always had to live with during the series.

You write Kaylee and Simon really well, and I can definitely imagine it would be hard to find privacy aboard Serenity. Great ifc!

That was funny and cute!

"Really, I'm just a big fan of any marriage surface"

That is possibly the funniest and most Wash-like line I have ever read. Simply brilliant.

And the rest of the story was delightful, of course. Nothing like Kaylee and Simon for making sexual frustration cute.

This was quite lovely, and wasnt smutty it was quite tastefully done which not enough authors do. You know how to work around words instead of writing things cruedely, Ive read far too many things using slang words like "pussy" or the oh-so-irritating phrase "throbbing member"

So Kudos to you for knowing how to spice up words and work around them to have a tastefully written sex scene.

Ahh, lovely story. I've just recently gotten hooked on Firefly and these two are my favorite couple. Wonderfully frustrating, but-with-a-nice-payoff-at-the-end, story :)

enjoyed it immensely. i'm biased though, since simon and kaylee are my favorite characters. keep up the good work. love reading about these two wonderful characters!

It makes me all warm and tingly inside. I can see why you like writing these fics... you're *good* at it. Thanks for the continuation.

A very, very, very nice story