very nice start to the story can not wait for the next chapter

Outstanding beginning to your story! I hope that a talk with Daphne will get the fighting spirit back into Harry. She is the perfect person to help him with all of the wizarding customs and rules he doesn't know. Excellent start, can't wait to see what you have planned for Harry next!

Good first chapter and quite the ending. Thanks for sharing!

Goodbye good world is a cliché phrase. Harry's character should have looked at the view and tried to jump. No words necessary. Nice explanation for Daphne being on the tower. Who would want to marry the ferret? Good beginning. Please drop the continuous dashes throughout the story. Irritating as hell.