Reviews for Shatter The Sky
Someone chapter 39 . 7/20
Please please please GIVE ME MORE
Leafy-tan chapter 54 . 5/12
Please update this way too awesome to be discontinued but you might be dead and that is sad don’t die
Weird Flex chapter 37 . 4/5
Not to be an a**hole or something, but like, 50 seconds for 50 meters is incredibly slow. I mean, I'm only a little above average, but even I can do 50 meters in about 7 seconds. Besides, 95 meters for a battleground is verrrrrryy small.
NamNamBolle chapter 54 . 3/28
I hope you continue this story, love it!
Dude chapter 1 . 3/14
It's really annoying to read stutter speech cos I kinda make a voice for characters in my mind so when i see stuttering, i stutter in my mind... at least it gives character, an annoying characteristic though
Guest chapter 54 . 1/5
Ummmm this was last updated in may. So I need this to be updated now. This is the best frickin story I have ever read in my life and I NEED it to continue! please.
Nevermorea chapter 54 . 10/3/2019
Few things

Please continue that AU it was wonderful
Please do a part two of Aizawa POV of Ichigo
PLEASE NEVER LEAVE ME ON A CLIFF HANGER I DIDNT EVEN REALIZE I WAS CAUGHT UP AND NOW I AM DYING FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER

lots-o-love
Never
XBnemesisX chapter 54 . 9/25/2019
I am so glad I found this story and stuck with it through all the stuttering at the beginning! It's sooo goooood!

I eagerly await the next chapter~
~Bnemesis
Zecrea chapter 36 . 9/21/2019
Awh,,, I was hoping that at least her name ‘Ichigo’ was real... haha! It’s cute and seems fitting for a hero :)

I’ll be honest, I very nearly let this story pass me by... I initially couldn’t get past Ichigo’s stuttering as it never melded with the nature of her lines... What I mean by that is that the way she spoke completely projected a stable level of confidence, and the stuttering became superficial, unnecessary and disruptive to the flow of the story. I mean, a truly self-conscious person wouldn’t outwardly sass their mentor/teacher the way Ichigo did in her intro chapter. This was the sole reason I initially didn’t want to continue further.

That’s my only criticism, really. I love the creative liberties you’ve taken with the plot- it truly reflects the impact your character is making on the storyline- it makes it far more interesting compared to the other stories out there which are literal copies of the original story :/
Mads-Chikistorm chapter 1 . 9/18/2019
I have a theory that one kurosaki's parents are alive, I can't wait to see how you continue
Mads-Chikistorm chapter 54 . 8/17/2019
whoa
so f-ing good I would actually kill a man to get another chapter
Ceralyn chapter 54 . 7/4/2019
I lost interest in BNHA for a while, so I haven’t kept up with your story. I read it again from the beginning. It’s really enjoyable. Although you were already a good writer at the beginning, having read it all the way through just now, I can see that you’ve improved on that. The characters feel so much more balanced now.

Most OC fanfics just have a character added to the canon events, and while there’s nothing wrong with that, it does get repetitive. You have several areas where your storytelling just shines, and it’s in the original scenes. I really like how you made changes to the Sports Festival arc and Final Exam arc. But I think my favorite of all was the teamwork trials the failed group had to take with Aizawa at the camp. I really loved the special chapter where Aizawa is first considering accepting Ichigo for the scholarship program and starts training her. Aizawa is my favorite character from the series, and you’ve really done a good job with him. Anyway, great story. Thanks for sharing!
uniquemusicgirl chapter 54 . 7/1/2019
I'm in love with this story
Dreiundzwanzig chapter 54 . 6/13/2019
Okay, ghis might sound weird but I kind of had hoped that Ichigo would be the kidnap victim. I know it's weird but I just love the drama ... ir's my one true weakness, well that and bribes.

Anyway I thought the teambuilding would have been completed best with the 'team' having to rescue zheir leader and working out their differences. I mean a summer camp and a couple of trials don't make you into a team, especially when there is a above average amount of conflicting personalities.
TheVulcanNara chapter 53 . 6/2/2019
Last question, sorry, so about Ichigo's quirk do you think as maybe a secondary quirk, an evolution, or just as an improvement of her quirk, could she transfer pain as well? Just a thought, it could be useful as an offense when it comes to fighting villains. Or can she numb nerves or effect pressure points? Have you ever thought about her using poison or paralytic weapons, like she could coat knifes or shurikin in them and she could have antidotes if she didn't want to use her quirk to heal. Hand to hand combat wise is she kind of like Ty Lee from The Last Airbender or is she more like Mai? I also kind of see her as this shy and tiny but also amazingly savage and ruthless Black Widow and I don't know why? I'm sorry this was more than one question... My bad.
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