Wow! The whole story was pretty amazing to read!

I just read this. And I thought it was very cute. I loved añl three chapters. Specially the last one with the whole
Press deal and the two of them waking up together. Great story. You are a wonderful writer

ah this is so enjoyable to read and so on character. i love madame christmas and riza's interaction. good job!

I absolutely like, no, love the way you wrote about Royai's wedding! Write more please

If I had left riza carry on their wedding as an eye of good luck, sure ed told the winner he won the roy? because he does not know anything. Xd could I work at roy anque I thought you had the dispertadia of malda
, good story

Ow! It ends too early.

Olivier is always that honest.

And Riza in Roy’s shirt! So wanna see that!

Becca is always the best. Can’t do anything without her.

uughh i cried, this was beautiful!

I would Love to read a Second chapter

second chapter please! but only if you're up to it

That was an interesting read. It has a different feel to other fics and I really like that. I would like to see another chapter but it's up to you if you want to.

What do you even mean you are torn between writing another chapter or not? WhERE IS MY SECOND CHAPTER OF THIS BEAUTIFUL FIC? I’m waiting. This was sweet and in character, well done!

I loved this! This feels different from the other wedding fanfictions so it feels nice to have a different kind. (I've only read two but that's not important...)