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Nemris chapter 39 . 8/20/2019 A surprise to be sure, but a welcome one. I did not expect Ezra to win, but I am glad he did. The victor pair did come out as a surprise, but I like surprises. I was pretty sure Akhal was the female victor, but I got the male wrong, it was not Niko nor Frederic. Very nice final chapter. Nice that you elaborated the years after the wedding. It is a very neat detail that Ezra could never really love his wife, but he did love their children. It is a quality I also made Invidia possesses, and it is nice to see it in Ezra. I have a question: did Opal Arlington volunteer or was she reaped? Nice job with the story. |
Nemris chapter 38 . 8/20/2019 It all happened very fast, but I am glad these games are wrapping up. Out of the five possible victor candidates, I think Frederic feels like a rather hinted at choice. The female victor is probably Akhal. It could be possible for Niko to be the male victor, but I think Frederic felt like he had more set up since Capitol. I would be very fine with Ezra or Invidia winning, but I don't think that will be the case. So my guess is Frederic and Akhal. Keep up the good work. |
Yo mama chapter 16 . 5/8/2019 Fredrick Akhal. Alcohol don't swear |
Blade Is My Penname chapter 35 . 4/25/2019 I was happily surprised to see a chapter update. Great job. Keep them chapters coming ;D |
Edevaux chapter 35 . 4/25/2019 oh gosh i log into fanfiction for the first time in months and it’s not the chapter althea dies haha sad for her but i don’t feel i got to connect with her as much as with eve from chosen warriors |
Manny61945 chapter 35 . 4/25/2019 Ooh it’s getting good,I’m not sure how Violet and Ezra will work together but I hope violet is not betrayed, I wasn’t surprised that Paisley went so quick, she went how a typical career goes, Cocky until the end. Ezra will certainly keep on avenging, I like how June and Mikeo are working together, it’s nice and exciting. Fredrick is becoming a contender, like I’d presume he was and poor Althea, it would’ve been easy to give her Allies up but she didn’t do props. Great chapter overall! |
Irew2376 chapter 35 . 4/25/2019 Woah! Some shockers here! I guess I did assume Paisley would die over Ezra, which may be a good thing. In general, I think Ezra will ultimately be more likable. I’m really excited to get down to business and see what happens to the rest of the characters. I have my ideas of who is going to be in the final tribute, so I’m excited to see where it goes. Ezra and Violet should be an interesting pair, considering both of their mentalities! |
Nemris chapter 34 . 4/14/2019 I really did not expect another event and a pair of deaths so soon. And I really would not have expected that they would just execute two tributes via peacekeepers. The third thing I did not expect was Linden dying. He felt like a guy who would survive at least over half way games. It even was not really his fault (well angering the Head Gamemaker was). So a new pair is formed. Getting your partner killed is actually a really bad thing, all that pre-game work will just go down the drain. Also bonding with someone who is assigned to you as a replacement in these conditions must be hard. Pairs that were together from the get-go have a pretty good advantage. Keep up the good work. |
laurenyeeann chapter 26 . 4/13/2019 I love the drama already showing. I'm just going to change up my order for the couples a little but I'm looking forward to the games! Couples in My Order: Linden (D7M) and Laura (D12F) (I'm biased) Gary (D6M) and Cerulean (D8F) Mikeo (D8M) and June (D11F) Ellie (D3F) and Noelani (D4F) Chrisjen (D7F) and Andrew (D11M) Nicholas (D4M) and Akhal (D10F) Qanom (D5M) and Hyacinth (D12M) Rory (D3M) and Psyche (D6F) Invidia (D2F) and Beckham (D9M) Paisley (D1F) and Ezra (D1M) Stefan (D2M) and Violet (D9F) Althea (D5F) and Frederick (D10M) Mine: Laura Hope (D12) Love: Linden (D7), Mikeo (D8), Gary (D6), Akhel (D10), Qanom (D5) Like: Akhel (D10), Hyacinth (D12), Nicholas (D4), Beckham (D9), Cerulean (D8), Andrew (D11), Psyche (D6), Althea (D5) Neutral: Chrisjen (D7), Violet (D9), Invidia (D2), Stefan (D2), June (D11), Noelani (D7), Ellie (D3), Rory (D3) Dislike: Hate: Paisley (D1), Ezra (D1), Frederick (D10) |
laurenyeeann chapter 25 . 4/13/2019 Mikeo and Akhal definitely get along well, and is that jealousy I detect from Frederick lol. Qanom and Hyacinth are so cute! Invidia and Beckham would be such a cute friendship but the sex might have ruined it before it really started. I hope Linden and Laura confess feelings and get closer. Niko and Akhal could be really amazing. Akhal has a lot of drama right now though. Andrew and Chrisjen are getting along well, but I wonder what will happen later in the games. Ooh Violet likes Beckham? DRAMA! Akhal and Niko will definitely be high on Paisley and Ezra's list after turning them down. Ooh Stefan knows about Violet's crush! And when the reporters are here! While it doesn't really seem like it's the main drama, it's an interesting side story. Yas Akhal turn Frederick down! I sorta want to see both same-sex couples facing off at the end and one male and one female die, so they have to live with someone they aren't attracted to. Stefan seems concerned for Invidia's safety. Maybe they'd be cute together? Couples in My Order: Linden (D7M) and Laura (D12F) (I'm biased) Gary (D6M) and Cerulean (D8F) Mikeo (D8M) and June (D11F) Chrisjen (D7F) and Andrew (D11M) Nicholas (D4M) and Akhal (D10F) Ellie (D3F) and Noelani (D4F) Qanom (D5M) and Hyacinth (D12M) Rory (D3M) and Psyche (D6F) Invidia (D2F) and Beckham (D9M) Paisley (D1F) and Ezra (D1M) Stefan (D2M) and Violet (D9F) Althea (D5F) and Frederick (D10M) Mine: Laura Hope (D12) Love: Linden (D7), Mikeo (D8), Gary (D6), Akhel (D10), Qanom (D5) Like: Akhel (D10), Hyacinth (D12), Nicholas (D4), Beckham (D9), Cerulean (D8), Andrew (D11), Psyche (D6), Althea (D5) Neutral: Chrisjen (D7), Violet (D9), Invidia (D2), Stefan (D2), June (D11), Noelani (D7), Ellie (D3) Dislike: Rory (D3) Hate: Paisley (D1), Ezra (D1), Frederick (D10) |
laurenyeeann chapter 24 . 4/13/2019 That first alliance will be strong to the outside, but they might just kill each other off quickly. The careers may have a similar problem about the backstabbing, and one of them will definitely die at least. Qanom and Hyacinth have an interesting strategy, I suppose. Well, it's not really a strategy. Just killing the girls so one of them would end up happy? Sexually assaulting a fellow tribute should be banned! Stefen should be kicked out or something. Poor Violet. Althea and Frederick's interview probably just made everything worse at this point. Boo Stefen. Stay strong Violet. Ooh Ellie and Noelani against Qanom and Hyacinth will be interesting. They'll definitely have to face off at some point! Althea and Mikeo? I'm starting to get confused. This is definitely a game of love. YAS LAURA AND LINDEN BONDING! Gary and Cerulean are a very strong pair. I'm rooting for them (behind my pair of course). Psyche has such a good personality, and I don't trust Rory at all. The alliance with Niko and Akhal and the rest of them seems doomed to fail already. Rory and Psyche actually getting along? Maybe it will be hate to love? Ellie and Noelani and Qanom and Hyacinth teaming up? I think they'd be at each other throats the entire time. Couples in My Order: Linden (D7M) and Laura (D12F) (I'm biased) Gary (D6M) and Cerulean (D8F) Mikeo (D8M) and June (D11F) Chrisjen (D7F) and Andrew (D11M) Nicholas (D4M) and Akhal (D10F) Ellie (D3F) and Noelani (D4F) Qanom (D5M) and Hyacinth (D12M) Rory (D3M) and Psyche (D6F) Invidia (D2F) and Beckham (D9M) Paisley (D1F) and Ezra (D1M) Stefan (D2M) and Violet (D9F) Althea (D5F) and Frederick (D10M) Mine: Laura Hope (D12) Love: Linden (D7), Mikeo (D8), Gary (D6), Akhel (D10), Qanom (D5) Like: Akhel (D10), Hyacinth (D12), Nicholas (D4), Beckham (D9), Cerulean (D8), Andrew (D11), Psyche (D6), Althea (D5) Neutral: Chrisjen (D7), Violet (D9), Invidia (D2), Stefan (D2), June (D11), Noelani (D7), Ellie (D3) Dislike: Rory (D3) Hate: Paisley (D1), Ezra (D1), Frederick (D10) |
laurenyeeann chapter 23 . 4/13/2019 Ezra and Paisley are an interesting couple, but the power dynamic between them could have problems in the future. They both want power and each other, and eventually one may have to be given up to gain the other. Andrew and Chrisjen may not be my favorite couple, but allying with Laura and Linden may help them in the future. Their alliance may not be the strongest as the tributes in it aren't the best, but hopefully they can work together well enough. Couples in My Order: Linden (D7M) and Laura (D12F) (I'm biased) Gary (D6M) and Cerulean (D8F) Mikeo (D8M) and June (D11F) Chrisjen (D7F) and Andrew (D11M) Nicholas (D4M) and Akhal (D10F) Ellie (D3F) and Noelani (D4F) Qanom (D5M) and Hyacinth (D12M) Stefan (D2M) and Violet (D9F) Rory (D3M) and Psyche (D6F) Invidia (D2F) and Beckham (D9M) Paisley (D1F) and Ezra (D1M) Althea (D5F) and Frederick (D10M) Mine: Laura Hope (D12) Love: Linden (D7), Mikeo (D8), Gary (D6), Akhel (D10), Qanom (D5) Like: Akhel (D10), Hyacinth (D12), Nicholas (D4), Beckham (D9), Cerulean (D8), Andrew (D11), Psyche (D6), Althea (D5) Neutral: Chrisjen (D7), Violet (D9), Invidia (D2), Stefan (D2), June (D11), Noelani (D7), Ellie (D3) Dislike: Rory (D3) Hate: Paisley (D1), Ezra (D1), Frederick (D10) |
laurenyeeann chapter 22 . 4/13/2019 Frederick and Akhal would be interesting, and Akhal seems pretty apologetic about her choice of staying with Nicholas. Maybe if something happens in the arena, something will change. Akhal and Nicholas also look cute! ARGH! Akhal will probably have to choose between Frederick and Nicholas at some point again in the arena because she seems to get along well with both of them, though both could just be faking it. All in all, Althea and Frederick have no chance at all at staying together. Couples in My Order: Linden (D7M) and Laura (D12F) (I'm biased) Gary (D6M) and Cerulean (D8F) Mikeo (D8M) and June (D11F) Nicholas (D4M) and Akhal (D10F) Ellie (D3F) and Noelani (D4F) Chrisjen (D7F) and Andrew (D11M) Qanom (D5M) and Hyacinth (D12M) Stefan (D2M) and Violet (D9F) Rory (D3M) and Psyche (D6F) Invidia (D2F) and Beckham (D9M) Paisley (D1F) and Ezra (D1M) Althea (D5F) and Frederick (D10M) Mine: Laura Hope (D12) Love: Linden (D7), Mikeo (D8), Gary (D6), Akhel (D10), Qanom (D5) Like: Akhel (D10), Hyacinth (D12), Nicholas (D4), Beckham (D9), Cerulean (D8), Andrew (D11), Psyche (D6), Althea (D5) Neutral: Chrisjen (D7), Violet (D9), Invidia (D2), Stefan (D2), June (D11), Noelani (D7), Ellie (D3) Dislike: Rory (D3) Hate: Paisley (D1), Ezra (D1), Frederick (D10) |
laurenyeeann chapter 21 . 4/13/2019 Enobaria is just creepy lol. Invidia's already thinking of other options, so that isn't good for her pairing but I suppose she's a career. I think she'll just stay with Beckham. Maybe they'll get along better in the future? Psyche and Rory aren't quite off to a good start, but maybe they'll warm up to each other eventually. What's Rory's problem? Andrew and Chrisjen gotta think of a new idea. Smart thinking on Akhal and Nikolas's part though. Beckham keeping his sexuality secret from Invidia could be interesting in the future. They aren't really sticking out at this moment though. Chrisjen is smart, she'll figure out Finnick's plan quickly enough. Andrew's gotta keep a better grip on his emotions though. He needs to learn how to act and learn fast. No Rory, don't do drugs! Especially not now. I really can't see Rory and Psyche really working out especially after these past two days. Couples in My Order: Linden (D7M) and Laura (D12F) (I'm biased) Gary (D6M) and Cerulean (D8F) Mikeo (D8M) and June (D11F) Nicholas (D4M) and Akhal (D10F) Ellie (D3F) and Noelani (D4F) Chrisjen (D7F) and Andrew (D11M) Qanom (D5M) and Hyacinth (D12M) Stefan (D2M) and Violet (D9F) Rory (D3M) and Psyche (D6F) Invidia (D2F) and Beckham (D9M) Paisley (D1F) and Ezra (D1M) Althea (D5F) and Frederick (D10M) Mine: Laura Hope (D12) Love: Linden (D7), Mikeo (D8), Gary (D6), Akhel (D10), Qanom (D5) Like: Akhel (D10), Hyacinth (D12), Nicholas (D4), Beckham (D9), Cerulean (D8), Andrew (D11), Psyche (D6), Althea (D5) Neutral: Chrisjen (D7), Violet (D9), Invidia (D2), Stefan (D2), June (D11), Noelani (D7), Ellie (D3) Dislike: Rory (D3) Hate: Paisley (D1), Ezra (D1), Frederick (D10) |
laurenyeeann chapter 20 . 4/13/2019 I like how Gary's making light of the tension-filled situation. He's one of the characters I like most. I hope he shows up more in future scenes. June and Mikeo were getting along so well and then the bed situation happened. Poor Althea, paired with Frederick. They definitely won't get along well, and the moment they can I can imagine them going for each others' throats. I guess how they are already. Mikeo and June will have a great friendship, I can already see it. It may be enough to get them through the games even. We'll see! Gary and Cerulean are so cute! I can see them being a great friendship or even more in the future. Their trust in each other could get them far. Once Cerulean toughens up they have a good chance! Hmm, Frederick and Akhal? I doubt Akhal, or anybody put in that situation, would like that. He's got an interesting storyline though. Couples in My Order: Linden (D7M) and Laura (D12F) (I'm biased) Gary (D6M) and Cerulean (D8F) Mikeo (D8M) and June (D11F) Nicholas (D4M) and Akhal (D10F) Chrisjen (D7F) and Andrew (D11M) Ellie (D3F) and Noelani (D4F) Qanom (D5M) and Hyacinth (D12M) Stefan (D2M) and Violet (D9F) Rory (D3M) and Psyche (D6F) Invidia (D2F) and Beckham (D9M) Paisley (D1F) and Ezra (D1M) Althea (D5F) and Frederick (D10M) Mine: Laura Hope (D12) Love: Linden (D7), Mikeo (D8), Gary (D6), Akhel (D10), Qanom (D5) Like: Akhel (D10), Hyacinth (D12), Nicholas (D4), Beckham (D9), Cerulean (D8), Andrew (D11), Psyche (D6), Althea (D5) Neutral: Chrisjen (D7), Rory (D3), Violet (D9), Invidia (D2), Stefan (D2), June (D11), Noelani (D7), Ellie (D3) Dislike: Hate: Paisley (D1), Ezra (D1), Frederick (D10) |