Update this PLEASE!

My only complaint... becas eyes are a really dark bluish gray

I think Beca shouldn't bother with Chloe. Chloe acts like she doesn't know what she really wants. I mean she willingly chased after Chicago when she was caught. It's only when Chicago started insulting Beca that she defended Beca and went back to her.

If Chicago hadn't done that then Chloe would have groveled even more and asked Chicago to take her back.
Beca shouldn't waste her time on someone that just drops you when the next best thing comes along. Beca should have made her work for it instead. Beca is very naive and kind of a pushover in your story.

Oh Chloe, you were doing so well up until you went after Chicago to try to explain and cover it up. I hope Beca opens her eyes and sees that Chloe doesn't really want her. All Chloe seems to want in this story is a quick fuck in the sack. I'm so disappointed with this version of Chloe.

... "It's not what it looks like." What the fuck Chloe. That’s so not cool.

Please continue!

That was great now I want to know what happens next.

Seriously amazing.

Um, amazing.

are you continuing this? cause it's awesome!