Reviews for Until they notice
Marsofflashes27 chapter 30 . 5/17
The end is incredible, but I’m still thinking who will be ace’s future partner. I’m looking forward to your reply️
yukino76 chapter 30 . 6/30/2018
So good it was very sweet thanks for sharing
Aerith-joey chapter 30 . 6/30/2018
Awww. ️
I i love it !
eminadaisuki chapter 30 . 6/29/2018
Well, baby brother is nice. Hahaha. I know how you feel Mary, I only have a little sister too. And we're both Mary. Hehe. Looking forward to read your next chapter, hope it'll be soon.
Natsuyuuki chapter 30 . 6/29/2018
Aww... Why not make one more just for Ace? he need moreeee love ya know?

Maybe one short about Ace, how he fall in love or make family? Maybe one as well about Mary and Grace baby brother? And uh... about girls's Romance Dawn? Sailing from Goa kingdom to Raftel? *kicked out*

ANYWAY, Thank you for update also complete it! See ya!
Psycho Teh Random Ink Vixen chapter 30 . 6/29/2018
Yay that was cute
Kurama-hime.Rocky-hime chapter 25 . 6/20/2018
Okay the date chapter was so fluffy I want to punch a wall. I become violent when I find something cute and makes me happy and I told myself to stop punching my leg every time it happened
eminadaisuki chapter 29 . 6/18/2018
Hahaha. Hope it's a girl and a boy.
Guest chapter 29 . 6/18/2018
Nice. I hope it's a girl and a boy.
Faezier chapter 29 . 6/18/2018
Thanks for the chapter!
Natsuyuuki chapter 29 . 6/17/2018
Okay... Twins. It's not-... well, actually I do a bit expected they have twins, even triplets. I think their children will be new legends 'cause they're still or will have a 'D' in their name later, right? By the way, thank you for update! See ya!
yukino76 chapter 29 . 6/17/2018
so good and all the friends fighting to know who will be the godfather also I really appreciate the different visits of Shanks, Garp and Dragon, as for the twins I know they will be spoilgood update thanks
myzmsandraa99 chapter 29 . 6/17/2018
marco became mother angry because her son was disturbed eh? shishishi, aw twins? I hope they have luffy's face! I imagine the crew can not fight the three deadly eyes! (read: puppy eyes) is very impatient waiting for the rest of your story! my love spirit
Psycho Teh Random Ink Vixen chapter 29 . 6/17/2018
The childbirth is going to be fun isn't it? :3
yukino76 chapter 28 . 6/4/2018
yeah a little Luffy running around so cute
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