Weird for Link to speak

Classic Harry

A great story. I enjoyed good ending more as they are together after all - Shirou and Saber.

This story is awesome I am so late too! would be great if I found this earlier reading along with your updates.. love all your characters and how you merged into fate, I am a big big fan of your Harry and Rin, their bond take a piece of me every chapters, the song by Harry last chapter is so good. Thank you for sharing this. Hope to see it’s continuity...

Enjoyed this story when I read it.
Made a TV Trope page for it

I JUST TOTALLY REALIZED YOU LEFT OUT A PERSONAL SKILL FOR DRESDEN 0-0

"Familiars(Bob)"

Basically, Heroic Spirits with Familiars have a "Familiars" Personal Skill, case in point being a Fate/Grand Order character who has doves as familiars, giving her the PS of "Familiars(Doves)". Oof.

I have a idea. A fic about fate apocrypha.
The red and the black faction join forces: 14 servants
All servants of the fifth holy grial war of this fic: 14 servants

Its only a idea. Please update you new history soon. Sorry for my bad english.

This was an amazing story, I'm kind of sad that I wasn't around to read it while it was being written, but on the other hand I pretty much marathoned the entire thing over the course of two days. What I can say is thank you for all of your hard work and well done. I'm looking forwards to whatever projects that you have in store for the future.

May God Bless you in your continued endeavours.

Shalom

I really do enjoy this story until now but oh boy you should once more look into how to write Sakura because that's really not how she talks.

The most important thing is that she does NOT use Shirou's name...like at all. She calls him Senpai.

"Hi" and other similar slang like words are also not something she uses.

All other characters read mostly like their canon counterparts. Except for Sakura how stands out like a sore thumb.

while I do consider Sakura's smile to be kind; I think broken best defines her smile. As many times as I have watched UBW, I always felt that best describes that moment, especially since f/sn the original series, and the vn did not fully have the means to subtly show that.

All in all, this series is great so far, I am both immersed and amused reading something crossing my favorite anime of all time, with one of my favorite fantasy style novels.

I honestly dislike this chapter. Harry can't even begin to "know" what Archer has been through. because Harry only really lived one life, only has the regrets of one lifetime. him saying "what a load of bull" or whatever IS out of line and retarded. Just because Shirou is twisted enough to be allowed to deny his own future self, doesn't mean some random novel series mc who only lived one life can make that same judgement. And in the end, Archer wasn't wrong. His motives and his regrets are not wrong or misplaced. The only one who has the capability of judging his outlook on life as crap is himself, a.k.a. Shirou, because only Shirou can truly understand the path that Archer took. Not Dresden.
Sorry for the mini rant, but the single most annoying thing to me in crossovers is when the author makes one of the crossovered characters insert themselves into someone else's problem and assert that, "No, that's wrong. THIS is how it should be." It's just like those Isekai anime where the MC is suddenly some sort of god tier mechanic or builder and starts showing all the natives why HE does things better than them.

Maybe do a crossover between your story after the good ending and Fate/Kaleid Liner Prisma Illya after the last episode of 3rei where Miyu's Shirou Emiya was saved. That would be interesting. Having one Shirou who still holds onto his ideals met another Shirou from another world who gave up his ideals to save his sister Miyu.

A nice teaser for a continuation. What I'm looking forward to seeing from here:

1. Will the continuity follow on from the Normal ending or the Good ending? On one hand, the former has the opportunity to have a nice reunion of Arturia and Shirou (Link as well), and of Rin with Harry (though dare we say we find a more enlightened Emiya returning as well?)
2. What other non-Fate franchises will we see characters from?
3. What other parts of the Fate universe are you going to bring in? You have Fate/Extra, Fate/Apocrypha, and the biggest self-contained multiverse, Fate/Grand Order, which has such a multitude of characters that you won't know what to do with. While FGO handles it to some extent, it would be an interesting dynamic between Arturia and Mordred in a more serious dramatic context.

In any case, when you get around to bringing this out, it will be a great read, I'm sure.

I reviewed hastily on last chapter lol. I saw the same scene that was in chapter 27(26) and thought it might have been a mistake without even really skimming or reading the rest. Didn't even realize it was a perspective change.

This is the same as chapter 27 but with some scenes modified, what gives?