Holy Guacamole, this story is off the chain! Thank you for the entertainment. Your fic's truly a marvelous craft of storytelling;I'm thoroughly impressed with your tale. It's easiest among my top five favorites on this site! Read your other fics and this masterpiece far at a rapid pace as it's pretty late in the night/early morning here, but I have greatly enjoyed what I've seen here so far and it looks like its about to come to a head. If I were a betting man, I'd placed all my earnings on Red Nova! Are you feeling it, Negs? Your hour of reckoning is coming and her name is Red Nova. I've a feeling that's one nemesis that could give him a run for his money.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Take as much time as you need in writing it as I'm aware that life can get complicated sometimes.

That ENDING though! That was thrilling! And such a strong way to end the chapter. I love that you bookended with the Fearsome Five (all of whom you write flawlessly; I’m super jealous). The goodbye scene with Anna and Ref Nova, though! It’s so well done and I was so sad to see them go their separate ways. But Red Nova has a hideout now (an observatory is a stroke of genius) and she can do what she wants to do as her own person. It’s so crazy to me that she’s finally self-sufficient! It seems like only yesterday she didn’t know who she was and was struggling to get a grip on life. I love how far she’s come and I can’t wait to see how far you’ll push her still!

~Rebel

Your banter has always been some of the best I’ve ever read but you’ve outdone yourself here. Darkwing and the villains’s interactions were just MAGICAL! And I loved getting to meet your other OC gLAMOUR! He’s great and fits into this world perfectly :) I definitely would not mind seeing him again.

Then we had the power struggle with Anna which was just delicious. You could feel the tension between the two and I totally understood Anna’s and Ellie’s perspective on things. And she has her new name! Red Nova; it’s such a big moment for her, finally having some identification, something the world can refer to her as, and it didn’t disappoint finally getting to witness that.

And MEGAVOLT! God, he was perfect. I loved that Red Nova was more of a spectator, uninsterested in the St. Canard villains, but she STILL went against Darkwing. That was just brilliant, bringing him in and having her unhook his grappling hook. She’s most definitely becoming the villain now and it’s such a great and fascinating journey.

I’m so happy you posted the new chapter! It was so well paced and I love how you parallel Red Nova’s journey with ours; we get to venture out with her, see more of the world, and discover who she’s going to be along the way. It’s wonderful. It’s brilliant. I can’t WAIT for the next one!

~RS

This was just as wonderful as the rest of it. The banter between the two was great and I love seeing the two of them bond! And it’s looks like Red Nova might have found her name... :) And AND she is outfitted with a really cool arm! With weapons and everything! That’s so badass, dude, and I love that idea for her.
She’s gonna be a match for Negaduck; the poor mallard won’t know what hit him!

Fantastic work, as always. Good luck with the next chapter!

~RS

The Fearsome Five! I love how you write them! And what a great twist involving all of them. I mean, mostly Negaduck but you know.

And now Ellie remembers everything! I’m suspecting her villainous name comes from the astronomy she and Anna we’re looking at together. Their chemistry is so good! I like their relationship so much and now they’re ginna go after Negaduck! I can’t wait to see what happens :)

Good luck writing the next chapter!

~RS

WHAT A CHAPTER! So many twists and turns! Tony is ALIVE? Where has he BEEN? His dialogue with Steelbeak was top notch, dude, I loved their back and forth. And Ellie still doesn’t remember who she is yet, but it’s coming. I can FEEL it! And when has a prosthetic arm now! That’s not the WORST thing after tangling with Negaduck. Not the best, but not the worst either.

And am I crazy, or would Anna be a PERFECT match for Megavolt? Thinking there’s something living in inadimste objects just screamed Megavolt to me and I kind of ship it now? He deserves love!

Fantastic job, as always! I can’t wait for the next installment :)

~RS

Your writing style is very fluid with transitions flowing smoothly into each other. It's almost like watching a darker version of Darkwing in my head! Keep it up Pharoahink! x3

This was such a great way to start the new story! Ellie is okay (or will be) and her benefactor sounds so interesting.

And poor Darkwing can’t ever catch a break in St. Canard! But I understand the citizens concerns at the same time... This is how good a writer you are; I can see everything from all points of view and understand all the characters.

I’m so excited to see where this goes and your comic book cover is also so intriguing! Good luck!

~RS