Good Work!

I think this my favourite Time Travel Story.

I'm really looking forward to the following Chapters.

Wait, Ginny time travelled, too? Awesome!

I’m enjoying this very much.

I found this fic in a reddit thread and realized it was right up my alley! I do love my Hinny and time travel, so it was great. Except for not being finished, as I haven't read unfinished fanfiction in years! Anyway, I'll try to remember how patient and calm I used to be about waiting for new chapters and the thrill after receiving the "update email".

About the fic itself, I love it! Very well written, interesting plot not knowing how they went back and who might be like them adds mystery and I find myself very into the story.

So yeah, I'll wait as patiently as I can for some more great chapters.

Cheers!
Em

And finally caught up. Great chapters. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for writing.

Commented on the first couple chapters last night. Haven't been able to put the fanfic aside since. Excellent story so far. Thanks for writing it. I hope you are still enjoying writing it too!

Another great chapter. Very good portrayals and clever changes to the original events. You mention not being satisfied with scene changes, but the chapter read smoothly to me. Thanks for writing!

In your a/n you say these stories can be found everywhere, but so far this is the best opening and portrayal of a time travel harry/Ginny I've read. Excited to see how it goes and thanks for writing.

so far this seems great. sure the idea has been done a lot but i like the idea and you’re pretty good at this so it’s not a problem. at least not for me

Amazing update as usual. I really like to see how you write the rest of second year since they know each other so well now. Well done!

And I LOVE positive view on Lavender! I am so tired of bashing her, thank you.

So far, this story works really well, thank you! And, finally, we have Ginny in the school. Looking forward to what will happen next.

I know you don’t like “Why they didn’t do X”, but this scenario seems so obvious, that I just have to share it:

.INT Great Hall during the lunch

HARRY and GINNY approach DUMBLEDORE at his table.

GINNY
Professor Dumbledore, Professor Dumbledore, could we talk with you, please? It seems like something dangerous!

DUMBLEDORE
Yes, of course, let us go to my office, so we are safe.

HARRY, GINNY, and DUMBLEDORE leave.

.INT Dumbledore’s office

DUMBLEDORE at his desk, HARRY and GINNY standing in front of the desk.

GINNY
Professor, I have suddenly found among my books I brought from the Diagon Alley this old diary, marked as being of Tom M. Riddle. Do you know who he was? Anyway, I tried to write to it, but it somehow seems to be enchanted and it replied to me. My Dad always taught us, that we shouldn’t trust anything self-conscious, where I don’t see where it has its brains. Isn’t this some kind of Dark Magic?

DUMBLEDORE
That seems really dangerous, and smart from you to follow Arthur’s advice. And yes, Tom Riddle, was a student of mine, and I would be very wary of anything of his, he was very interested in the Dark Magic.
Do you have any idea, how the diary got amongst your books?

GINNY
I am really don’t certain, but the only two people who were around my books I remember was Harry, when he gave me his books from Professor Lockhart, and then Mr Malfoy, Draco’s dad, took my books for a moment and returned them back, during that brawl in the bookshop. I don’t think anybody else was near to my cauldron with books.

Lights out.

I really don’t know what stopped Ginny from asking her Mum: “Mummie, I am bored! Aren’t there any other kids of my age in the neighbourhood? Didn’t you mention some Lovegood girl once?”

I am enjoying your story and the way Harry and Ginny are tackling their challenges. I also like the way you have them second guessing themselves and trying to retain the good whilst losing the bad. Thank you for sharing your story

Interesting chapter. I like the way you are presenting all the different scenarios and exploring how things could go.