Show, don't tell; there are way too many things told via third person, which takes away from the narrative. Also, expand on the character's actual personality, cause right now it just feels very VERY mary sue-y. Also, Blade Luna? You seriously want to call a character Blade Luna? Like, if you have a good reason for it, kudos to you. But like, that name is very difficult to take seriously.

Is it a simple noble or celestial dragon ? By the way, she seems to look quite amazing !