omf this is amazing!

sequel. Sequel. SEQUEL. SEQUEL!

It's really cute. I wish there are more chapters though. Another stable, a development in their relationship. Nice work. Interesting idea for a fic.

This is really nice. Well written with smooth flow and good humor. I laughed quite a few times, especially at Link's indignant angriness. Hangriness. Ha. XD That's how I usually play him as.

Good one-shot.

You do know that the bone merchant is Kilton, right?

Anyways! Awesome story!:D Link as an insane kid was a very fun thing to read, and from Beedle's point of view too!:D (if you were ever going to continue this, i wonder how you would lead to Beedle saying "We must've been married in our past lives!" xP) and i didn't know he and Parcy liked each other!xD but it's a nice idea too! and yeah, i loved how you did Parcy's character, very well:P
(oh, i've just been to your profile, and i think i'm interested in your future works:P i also have a work of my own in progress and i think i would like you to see it someday x) (someday- meaning, i have this giant problem with updating anything, like, a chapter once a year, so who knows when that'll happen...) but eh, for now i'll just follow you, ha:D)

And i don't really know what else to say for now, maybe it'll come with writing the review (because sometimes i can make them reeaally long xD) but i do have some complaints to make:P as i said, the oneshot was awesome and i loved every part of it (and now i know why no one ever remembered THAT guy's name!xD good play, my friend:D) but there were some odd things i noticed, not many, mind you:P one was that one Bokoblin puffed into the black/purple smoke and disappeared leaving parts behind, while his brothers in arms just fell to the ground and stayed there- for there was no other mention of puffs of smoke or Link collecting their monster parts or weapons- that was another strangeness: why wouldn't Link grab the Moblin club? i'm pretty sure it would do more that the breaking boko bow xD speaking of which, i'm REALLY curious about Link's target shooting in the water xD if you ever were to reply to me, please let me know what it was about:D (i kinda want to believe it was some reference to other games- in OoT and TP you can basically use the Hookshot/Clawshot underwater so why not the bow?xD but then again, Link here can't dive:/ don't you agree it's such a loss? not only we could collect all the gemstones that fell in the water too deep (lol, i know the pain xD), but we could also explore the amazing world underwater!:D coral reefs, Zora temples... like, what's the point of fish people if they live above water? (yes, way to go, Nintendo) ayy, sorry for getting off the topic...
i needed a new paragraph for this, to better describe the situation, but now that i think about it, you must've been editing it too many times to notice this small detail:) so (no one can tell me not to begin sentences with so:V), when Beedle gets out of the Stable and Link shouts that a Bokoblin set him on fire, it was only one Bokoblin, and it was red and wielding the Moblin club. And Link kills it with two arrows and the monster disappears in the puff of smoke (so it's only this monster puffs out, you must've changed it somewhere in between:)), so then there come more monsters (it would have been better if you written how many there were or approximately (though Beedle can count well from what i could tell xP), so the readers could better visualise the situation- five, ten, twenty?:) (though at camps there are usually around five/seven:P)) and they kill them with more shanenigans xP so then, there is left the last Bokoblin- blue with the flaming Moblin club, which set Link on fire... as you can see it already rings a bell- the one that set Link on fire was killed earlier and this one just arrived with his troup, so he couldn't have been there while Link was being set on fire and survive puffing into oblivion and change its own colour while doing so...:) unless Link was set on fire two times? That would make sense, but it wasn't mentioned unfortunately:P but hey, that's the biggest problem in this shot, so since it's pretty small, that's good, isn't it?xD
oh, and just going through the chapter again to check my information reminded me off all the things i loved (like, wherever i look there's always something!:D), like the reference to Kass xD or how Beedle was frozen with fear before engaging in battle, that was very... very character-wise/character-well-done (i'm sorry, i forgot the right word xP), i was really hoping he would not shake off of it and not make it in time (but it's just my way of doing things xD), and how Parcy finished off that monster on the spur of the moment- someone who was pretty shocked at the sight of monster parts... well, it did seem a bit too good, but afterwards i'm pretty sure she'll still be haunted by that:P oh, and i also loved how Link was puffing up, and even the second time was just as stupid, but he was on the create now!xD (too good that was:D) or generally Link in Beedle's pov, it was both funny and smart, how you did write it:D (though which friends did Beedle have in mind when he was threatening Link?:P) and the beginning was also interesting, though i am wondering what other 52 points of Beedle's book are (Rule 24. rules xD) that he hadn't written anything about running up until 57th :P

so... that might be all, i think:) sorry for the mess up here, but that's just the way i write, my fingers can't work fast enough to keep up with my thoughts and things i would love to say:P but my general point would be that you did a VERY GOOD job:D as for editing so many times- if you're stuck editing and editing, but don't know what's wrong, maybe you should have someone else look at it, like a fellow writer or someone else you'd feel comfortable with, if you have someone like that, it would help, even just hearing their opinion:) and it's not like i'm telling you that it has to be me, but i'm open to beta reading so if you needed any help, i can be there:) (well, i'm also at university and on another part of the globe, but...whenever i could, i mean:D)
So yeah, thanks for sharing this funny fic i could've spent my afternoon reading (instead of studying...oops, i really should get back to it now xD) and i'll be looking out for more!:D may the winds of fortune and inspiration be at your back and good luck with all else! Take care:)

Ha! Finally someone who realized Link IS NOT A MUTE, but quite taciturn by choice (what with all the dialogue options in the game, and his hilarious rudeness you adapted quite nicely in your story). Anyway, effortlessly flowing, and amusing writing. Please overcome your insecurities more often, I'd gladly read more from you c:

That was a neat little story! I like it!

A great first chapter! Very well written and a fresh approach on BotW. Good job on keeping that trademark zany Zelda feeling throughout even with the fight scene. It reminds me of a Skyward Sword fanfiction from a few years ago, “The Customer is (not) Always Right” which featured a rather irritable Rupin. Although your premises are similar, your inclusion of Link in a major role and Beedle!s more optimistic outlook still sets “The Bone Merchant” apart. I’ll be looking forward to seeing the future of this fic!

Pretty nice writing!