I don’t think Jaz would let it get out of hand like this

More? Love it!

Please Please Update!

Wow. Powerful story.

Still addicted, I love all your stories so I'll be reading all of them. Thanks for the update to this one I look forward to seeing where this goes. Thanks for all the stories )

I keep checking to see if there is an update on this story. Did you plan to keep going with this one? Just curious I really liked it.

This is really interesting to read. You have the potential to be a very good writer! There are a lot of run on sentences and you jump around a lot, which makes all your stories a bit hard to read. Sometimes, it's hard to tell whose point of view I'm reading and what exactly is happening. No hate, just some constructive criticism that will hopefully help you out :)

I love this story. Then again all your stories are great lol. I can't wait for more updates on this one when I got to chapter 4 I was like nooooooooooooooo I want more ! LOL
Keep up the great work )

Wow. This story is a little darker than I’m used to seeing. I look forward to seeing where you are going with it.

Poor Jaz! This one is starting off a little dark, but I am very interested o see what happens next, please continue this and your other fics soon!