its awosome please for romance make winter and jaune

dug this chap. port rambling was hilarious

Sleepy!Winter! is best winter.

holy shiz that was adorable

love the story but you need to stop using "spade sized hand".

lol I have read that like 25 times once or twice would have made sense but it is like your calling card.

back to the story lol seriously a great concept and your writing for the most part doesn't have the mass of errors we typically expect from fanfiction. all in all thanks for writing!

Interesting premise, of a already veteran jaune.
Seems that both Adam and Jaune have had a increase in skill and notoriaty, in relation to canon.
There seems to be some past Winter Jaune "adventures" that leads Winter to want to bang.

All in all a solid story so far, will be waiting for the next chapter!

this is so good i hope winter and jaune get together

I'm loving this story. I really hope you continue it.

It's so great that you're back. Best of luck with your final year and job search. Things are weird right now, but this is a once-in-one-hundred-years thing.

I've really enjoyed this story and the character you made Jaune into, and so glad you're continuing. I completely get everything in your soapbox.

Glad to see more of this story, no matter what else happens in your life - finishing college and making use of that MechE degree is certainly more important than a story you just wrote for fun. Also wishing you the best in your job search given current events, and I believe you'll get there (insofar that an online content can support your efforts).

Thank you for the update. I did not expect Winter to be so handsy, but it appears she did not either. The description of the settlement was pretty cool. It seems Jaune still can't catch a break though.

Keep writing, and take your time.

This is really an enjoyable story, and I'm glad you updated. I find myself enjoying the character interactions moreso than the action, however, so I'm hoping that the next chapter will not be another action sequence involving the hostage rescue. Regardless, though, I'm looking forward to whatever you write as I genuinely enjoy this take on Jaune, Winter, Glynda, and even Port.

Nice Chapter, interesting plot setup, I'll be following.

Te amo, espero el otro capitulo :V

Please continiou

So. There are some issues I think could have been addressed better. The timeline is kind of fuzzy. Jaune's explosion out of nowhere is kind of out of left field. Not unwarranted, but still feels rushed because Jaune is strangely teenager-like in Ozpin's office. He doesn't seem jaded, on edge, or hardened, he feels like Jaune in canon's Volume 1.

Still, the world building is solid. The settings well developed and feeling lived in. The description of the Legion is well paced without being a giant info dump. Certain scenes are obviously being withheld as reveals, and those reveals are spaced evenly enough to not feel lacking.