What can I say about something like that? Yubel is increasingly humanized at this point in her life. lol
And that's good.
The biggest problem in this work is the fact that Chazz is so confused and manipulated by hatred ... this may end up leading him to a path of no return and from which he will surely regret it later. But it can cause irreparable damage until then.
Congratulations on the chapter.
A simply incredible work.
Ps .: I still have not had the courage to comment on the trilogy of AU 5ds. The work is so sensational that I lack a word to describe in some humble comment ... Until I can express myself with all the satisfaction and gratitude obtained by such reading, I already advance that I enjoyed quite a lot of both readings (this sequence of GX and the alternative 5ds trilogy).
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O que eu posso dizer sobre algo assim? Yubel está cada vez mais humanizada nessa fase de sua vida. kkkk
E isso é bom.
O maior problema nesta obra, é o fato do Chazz está tão confuso e manipulado pelo ódio... isso pode acabar levando-o a um caminho sem retorno e do qual ele certamente se arrependerá depois. Mas pode causar um estrago irreparável até lá.
Parabéns pelo capítulo.
Uma obra simplesmente incrível.
Ps.: Eu ainda não tive a coragem de comentar nas trilogia do AU 5ds. A obra é tão sensacional que me faltam palavra para descrever em algum humilde comentário... Até que eu consiga me expressar com toda a satisfação e gratidão obtidas por tal leitura, eu já adianto que gostei bastante de ambas as leituras (esta sequência de GX e a trilogia 5ds Alternativo).

All the stories you wrote about this subject, which I read, left me with great satisfaction. Primarily your AU of 5ds. Z-one... This was the most shocking story one could expect for such a character (and I felt like reference some cards used by Yubel in the pseudo-duel against Alexis - Test of Devoted Love; Curse of Loneliness - These cards gave me the feeling of being a “homage/tribute” to the true feelings of this alternative Z-one). But this is not the focus here...
This current work is undoubtedly one of the most plausible of being a continuation of the official anime. With Chazz's resilience to be acting so complex. Of course, an injured heart can end up harming a person, but I can not imagine Chazz being the "villain"...
And about the last remark in the final notes...
I would really like to see the stats and effects of the other cards in the other old fics. Mainly the protagonists in AU 5ds. Blazing Rose Dragon, Hope Star Dragon-Morning Rose, Aki's synchro cards, Yusei and the dark sign... Jack and the new ones from Crow and Raven... The cards featured in Judai's Ritual of Doom, Neos variations, Yubel and Alexis... Anyway. All the possible presentations of the protagonists... LOL
I know it's too much to ask, but it's one of the things I'd like to know how it really works.
Thank you for composing so many fantastic scenarios of so many works by Yugioh!
I have not yet had the chance to read all the works, and I am still finishing this current fic, but can I also express one more of my desires?
A fic in partnership with his friend DragonKnight15. You could create something incredible together...
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Todas as histórias que você escreveu deste tema, as quais eu li, me deixaram com uma grande satisfação. Principalmente sua AU de 5ds. Z-one... Essa foi a história mais impactante que se poderia esperar para tal personagem (e eu senti como referência alguns cards usados por Yubel no pseudo-duelo contra Alexis - Test of Devoted Love; Curse of Loneliness - Estes cards me deram a sensação de serem uma "homenagem" aos sentimentos verdadeiros deste alternativo Z-one). Mas este não é o foco aqui...
Esta obra atual é, sem dúvidas, uma das mais plausíveis de serem uma continuação do anime oficial. Com a resalva do Chazz estar agindo tão complexamente. Claro, um coração ferido pode acabar por prejudicar uma pessoa, mas eu não imagino o Chazz sendo o "vilão"...
E sobre a última observação nas notas finais...
Eu realmente gostaria de ver as estatísticas e efeitos das outras cartas nas outras fics antigas. Principalmente as dos protagonistas no AU 5ds. Blazing Rose Dragon, Hope Star Dragon-Morning Rose, os cards synchro da Aki, Yusei e dos dark sign... Jack e os novos do Crow e Raven... Os cards apresentados no Ritual of Doom do Judai, variações do Neos, Yubel e Alexis... Enfim. Todos os possíveis apresentados dos protagonistas... LOL
Eu sei que é pedir muito, mas é uma das coisas que eu gostaria de saber como realmente funciona.
No mais... Obrigado por compor tantos cenários fantásticos de tantas obras de Yugioh!
Ainda não tive a chance de ler todas as obras, e ainda estou terminando esta fic atual, mas eu posso também espressar mais um dos meus desejos?
Uma fic em parceria com seu amigo DragonKnight15. Vocês conseguiriam criar algo incrível juntos...

Mmmm... anti spell fragrance... blaze accelerator reload... that... spell card that eemoves a continuous trap for drawing 2

...well... fusion tag is always an option... just saying... not for v-z but rather, for vw tiger catapult so you COULD get around that particular problem

Nice to see you using the new stuff.

So Will Water show up again to showcase some of the newer destiny heroes?

Oh man awesome ending showing a new threat leading up to a sequel I like it

Oh man can't wait to see what Fairy Yubel can do

It's nice to see you write Yugioh/Strawberry Panic crossovers again. YuGiOh! GX: Strawberry Crisis is first story of yours I read. Also it and 5D's Alternative Book 1: Stardust and Roses are reason I started Following you.
Question: Are we going to see all members of Planet Series together and Tragoedia in some plot together later? Not being able see Tragoedia's card form in Yugioh GX manga was one of its biggest mistakes.

I loved this chapter.

Saitama Ex Machina... I like it. The card may seem like a convenient solution to a tight spot, but it could be used like a reverse "Ally of Justice" card...

So in the next story Jaden’s gonna reunite with the ladies of Astrea.

I think it’s great that you have Chazz’s conflict related back to the light. Excited to see how you incorporate it into to the next installment as there is a bigger character pool available.

A great end to this story and more on Lucia and of course Chazz is involved

Nice.

Fairy Yu el was quite unexpected