very enjoyable! hope you write more Darvey fics.

I liked your story. Right to the point! It is ok not to write about sex they had for 3 hours. It leaves some ideas for imagination. Sorry about the funeral.

Short and sweet and fun! I love it! Every fic that has mentions of my favorite darvey cliches like whipped cream and Donna being on Harvey's shirt, I'm all for it. Haha! Did you get yourself drunk and had the hangover? Lol! kirbyspecter on twitter, by the way. We should be friends!

Great continuation of the previous chapter! Very enjoyable. Well done :)

Yes! I want a second chapter!

pleaseee.. continuee this is awesome

Great first fic! Loved your drunk Donna, very amusing! Keep it up, you can only get better! :)

great start. Drunk Donna is so confident and going after what she wants. I love the little moments, how he takes care of her and how she keeps saying she is doing fine and he's trying to be a gentleman and not act on all her signals, djkghkd even her kiss.. can't wait to see where this goes

This was fun! And the story looks promising too! It's also well-written. No need to doubt yourself. :) I cant wait for the next chapter.
Tip: not to be a bad influence or anything, but you really have got to try to have a hangover yourself even just for once. Trust me, you'll regret that you even listened to this advice, but at least youll have a first-hand experience of it and no one can take that away from you. Lol

This was was funny, I love stories were one of them is drunk and the other is caring.

I love this storyline! Don't doubt yourself, I think it was very well written, especially for your first time writing a FanFic. One small thing I would say is, don't be afraid to be a little more descriptive other than that it was great. You should definitely continue with this story.

Well done! You need to keep going!

Really good! Can't wait for Ch2 x